Talk:Guitar (Sonny Sharrock album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 17:30, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and my GAN review for your nomination is going to arrive soon. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:30, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- Guitar is a solo studio album by American jazz guitarist Sonny Sharrock. → remove "solo"
- is it his fifth album? Include a number
- recorded the album → recorded it
- from critics → from [[music journalism|music critics]]
- When Guitar was released → Upon the release of Guitar
- who praised → who acclaimed
- playing → his playing
- by rock critic → by The Village Voice writer
- jazz writer → jazz critic
- said it → felt it
Infobox[edit]
- Is the exact release date known?
- The recording place is written a little bit weak (sorry!), try to change it like it is displayed here
- fusion → jazz fusion
- You may use a flat list; look here
- was viewed → was perceived
- record Black Woman in → record, Black Woman, in
- ideas: "You → ideas, confessing that "you
- which nationality is the band?
- "Devils Doll Baby", which featured Sharrock's frenzied slide guitar playing, and → "Devils Doll Baby"—which featured Sharrock's frenzied slide guitar playing—and
- had late in their careers → had experienced in the edge of their careers.
Release and reception[edit]
- beautiful" but → beautiful", but
- well defined → well-defined
- Hyder said his → Hyder confessed that his
- genres while writing, "throughout → genres, while further writing that "throughout
- next album Seize → add comma after "album"
- (1987) could → (1987), could
- any listener's → every listener's
- quality, "helping → quality; it "[helped]
Track listing[edit]
- All music → All material
- Unlink his name
- The template page links songwriters/composed. Dan56 (talk) 00:53, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- This statement needs to be accompanied by the credits ref.
- The list needs a header and a reference see this for an example
Personnel[edit]
- Rename section into "Credits and personnel"
- You may also add "RPM Sound Studios – recording studio"
- Credits are adapted from the album's liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Guitar.
Outcome[edit]
I've put this article On hold for 7 days. Best and good luck with editing, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:06, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- I've made changes and responded @Cartoon network freak: Dan56 (talk) 00:54, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Dan56: Most of them all were suggestions, but gladly passing anyway. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:52, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.