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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:23, 19 June 2010 (UTC) Overall this is a good article. I was surprised not to see it on WP:OMT though, but that's probably because an armored cruiser =/= battlecruiser. It does feel lacking in terms of information compared to others I've read, but I'll trust that's all the info there is. Anyway:[reply]

  • "However, the ship remained unengaged throughout the engagement," wording feels slightly redundant.
    • Indeed it does and I've changed it.
  • To double check, is this all the info that can be found on the ship?
    • Without going into archival data this is it. The armoured cruisers, along with the dreadnoughts, spent a very boring war patrolling the North Sea and training. Unfortunately I can't even tell when she was refitting so I can't confirm that she participated in several of the post-Jutland sorties by the Grand Fleet.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:31, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

That's the only issue I have. I'll put it on hold and ideally will be able to pass it tomorrow. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:23, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good. Issues are fixed so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:24, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]