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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:49, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Didn't even give me time to put it on WT:OMT. Thanks! Parsecboy (talk) 16:24, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like you're still futzing with it; lemme know when you're done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:17, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Just a dupe link I caught when I was working on HMS Irresistible (1898) - it should be fine now. Parsecboy (talk) 18:22, 5 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • No DABs, external links OK
  • Use a better link in the infobox for the VTE engines.
    • Done
  • Link the guns in the main body.
    • Done
  • Provide a conversion for the 12- and 3-pdr guns by bore diameter, not weight
    • Done
  • Conversion for the torpedo diameter in the main body doesn't match the one in the infobox
    • Fixed
  • Link paid off, Vice-Admiral, Captain, skipper
    • Done
  • Home Fleet stationed comma after Fleet
    • Done
  • before at 04:45 began to capsize missing word? --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:31, 19 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Fixed. Here I was, waiting for you to do the review, and I apparently missed it when you did! Parsecboy (talk) 21:48, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]