Talk:Hadong Ambush

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Good articleHadong Ambush has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 1, 2010Good article nomineeListed
October 20, 2010WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
Current status: Good article

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hadong Ambush/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jackyd101 (talk) 16:46, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A very good article that is close to passing GA once the minor problems identified below are sorted out. Regards--Jackyd101 (talk) 16:46, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • "a successful ambush of North Korean forces." - US forces surely?
  • The article suffers a bit from repetitions - e.g. "battalion" in the third paragraph of the lead, "committed" in the first paragraph of Outbreak, stream in withdrawal
  • "Having fallen out of favor with the North Korean command" - South surely?
    • I have completed all of these fixes. Thank you for your review. —Ed!(talk) 19:23, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]