Talk:Hang with Me/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing the article. — Novice7 (talk) 10:43, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Basic checks

• No Dab links.
• One redirect link. Rolling Stone links change their address sometimes. Try archiving the link using WebCite and add it to the article (using "archiveurl" and "archivedate" field).

 Done

• The cover art Image:Robyn - Hang with Me.jpg is a little big. Reduce it to 300 × 300 pixels.

 Done

• The sound sample File:Robyn Hang with Me.OGG looks good.

Prose review will be added in shortly. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• taken from her sixth studio album, Body Talk Pt. 2 – maybe year of the album should be included in brackets?

 Done

• It was released as the album's lead single on 16 August 2010 in Sweden. – comma after "in"

 Done

• An acoustic version of the song had previously been released on Body Talk Pt. 1 in June 2010. – is it "released"? Shouldn't it be "included"? Also, comma afrer Pt. 1

 Done

• It also reached the top ten in Norway and on the US Hot Dance Club Songs chart. – better if you expand and write "United States" instead of US, as it is its first occurrence. Also, remove the "on" after "and".

 Done

Background

• "Hang with Me" was originally recorded by Klas Åhlund's ex-wife, Paola Bruna – ex-wife -> the-wife.

Sorry, it is "then-wife". — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• Comma after Stockcity Girl.

 Done

• Maybe you should add something like "In an interview with Kyle Anderson of MTV Newsroom, Robyn said of the song.."

I believe that quote was originally from Robyn's website. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

It's okay then. — Novice7 (talk) 06:16, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• Also, link Bonbon?

 Done

• Last sentence of the paragraph "released" to "included" or "featured".

 Done

Composition

• The song carries similar "anthemic, emotional beats" of "Cry When You Get Older" from Body Talk Pt. 1,[7] and similar musical structure to that of the Pet Shop Boys. please rewrite.

 Done

• As the lyrics of the song have been quoted, provide a source for that (as in In the chorus, Robyn sings "Just don't fall recklessly, headlessly in love with me.")

 Done

Critical reception

• He concluded, saying, "it would.. -> He concluded by saying that it would "quoted material excluding it would".

 Done

• Is stereogum reliable? Can you find another review?

Removed. Will see if I can find another review. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Chart performance

• Please provide references to show the song's debut (as in Denmark).

 Done

• remove "chart" after Billboard.

 Done

Music video

• Again, stereogum.

Removed. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Live performances

• She chose to perform the song because the show's producers asked for it a little re-write would be better :)

 Done

Tracklisting

• Provide language parameter for iTunes Store links

 Done

Credits

• Change the credits to [Person] – [credit]

Is it necessary? Klas Åhlund did, like, everything on the song :P Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

LOL! i totally misunderstood xD  Done. Pancake (talk) 13:13, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Lol, it's okay :D — Novice7 (talk) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Charts

• Good

References

• Ref 9 missing publisher (work =Rolling Stone)
• Ref 12 missing publisher
• Ref 29 same thing as above

All done. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Overall, a good article. — Novice7 (talk) 11:28, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Last comments

• Mention the duration of the sample on the description (like A 22-second sample).

 Done

I actually started liking the song. It's a great article. Just look through and see that all errors are fixed. I'll be happy to pass it then. — Novice7 (talk) 06:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

OK, all errors are fixed now! :)Pancake (talk) 14:25, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Happy to pass! :) — Novice7 (talk) 14:57, 3 March 2011 (UTC)