Talk:Heavy Competition/GA1

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Another great article, Hunter. Here are some minor suggestions:

  • "Heavy Competition" is the twenty-second episode – should be "22nd" since the other numbers in the article aren't spelled out.
  • spell out "doesn't" in the plot (twice)
  • Since there's currently only one image in the article, can you add an image of Idris Elba to the production section?
  • Wilson said the scripted moment in which he spun around the HarperCollins secretary and said "spin move" was very popular among the writers – Is something missing from this sentence? It doesn't make any sense to me.
  • "The A.V. Club" should be italicized

I will put the article on hold for seven days. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 20:41, 15 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think I got them all. I tried rewording the "spin move" sentence to make more sense, let me know if that's better. Thanks! — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 22:00, 15 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Nice work. I'll pass the article. TheLeftorium 17:20, 16 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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