Talk:Helen Magnus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GRAPPLE X 15:31, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Never heard of Sanctuary, but my younger self religiously tuned in to SG1 for Amanda Tapping...

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   Just a few changes needed
   "The character is over a century and a half old, having been given her advanced longevity from injecting herself with vampire blood." -> should be "by injecting herself"
   "This allowed each member unique abilities." -> Probably should be "granted each member"
   "By the turn of the 20th century, her research with the abnormal population went into full swing and founded the Sanctuary Network." -> "and she founded..."
   "during which she decided to use the embryo an bear her daughter" -> "use the embryo to bear her daughter"
   "Despite this, Magnus believes her life energy might be in the shield buffer." -> I'm not really sure what this means.
   

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   MOS is fine.

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

   Citations are grand.

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

   Scope is grand.

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   Article is neutral.

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   Images are used well. One is commons, one is fair-use with a solid rationale.

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Just going to hold this until the 1A fixes are sorted, then it should be ready to pass.

Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I believed I have addressed all the issues. -- Matthew RD 16:26, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed the changes, and I'm passing this one. Well done! GRAPPLE X 21:17, 18 August 2011 (UTC)