Talk:History of Burger King/GA1

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March 2014 GA Review[edit]

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Review

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Reviewer: Secret (talk · contribs) 19:15, 15 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article sometime this week. Secret account 19:15, 15 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm failing this article for a wide varity of reasons, especially comprehensiveness as I realized a bunch of the "key dates" is missing in the body of the text.

  • Nothing about the Whopper being launched in the early section, which is its most popular product.
  • "BK releases its first TV advertisement" - Not in body of text
  • "The company begins to expand through franchising." - Not in body of text, and an important concept in regards to the history.
  • Heavy use of [1] as a source, which is not a reliable source
  • The "key dates" section is heavily used from the source above, I don't know if that's close paraphasing or a copy of the Wikipedia section but still, very problematic - quick fail right there.
  • "Industry innovations" - nothing in the body of the text, just merge it.

I won't go on further but considering the questionable answers source/close paraphasing, I'm failing this article. Secret account 20:40, 1 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]


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