Talk:How About a Friendly Shrink?/GA1
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Reviewer: Theleftorium 12:57, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
Nice work on the article Hunter! Here's my suggestions:
- "How About a Friendly Shrink?" received generally positive mixed reviews – Wouldn't "received mixed to positive reviews" sound better?
- lowest rating for an individual Desperate Housewives in series history – "the series' history"? (appears in the Reception section too)
- which he won't let Lynette read – "he will not let"
- what she's sure is – "she is"
- he can't reach – "he cannot"
- Gabrielle initially suspects her daughter Juanita + Susan is pleased that her son M.J. – will avoid confusion to people not familiar with the show (like myself)
- Angie takes an instant dislike to her son Danny's – same as above
- who is in the Leopards, are among the slow group – shouldn't this say "is among"?
- seems to understand what he's been through – "he has"
- the person she's become – "she has"
- Link Wisteria Lane
- The episode marked the return of
- when her character suffered a nervous breakdown – you can't say "when her character" because Katherine Mayfair is a character
- Reeves is the third former –> Leeves
- Link "rating" and "share" to Nielsen_ratings#Ratings/share_and_total_viewers
- Link You Gotta Get a Gimmick
- praised the episode, and said she was – no need for a comma here
- Try to avoid repetition of the word "said" in the second and third paragraphs of the reception section
- Can you move the quotation box to the left? The image above gets in the way.