Talk:Howard Bellamy (Doctors)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Infobox looks good.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• The lead should summarize the entire article, so mention info from #Casting and #Development.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• The storylines section looks good.
  • Thank you! – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after Julia Parsons.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Also remove the comma after "the situation".
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:REF.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Also try reducing the amounts of quotations overall.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Be consistent on either having Digital Spy or Digital Spy.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Link Digital Spy only once in #Characterisation.
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Add a serial comma after "Hollyoaks".
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
• Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
  •  Done – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 21:34, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Responded to your comments – DarkGlow (contribs • talk) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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