Talk:Human trafficking in South America

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Revising article[edit]

″Revising article″ Hello! My name is Elizabeth Gamez. I am interested in working on this article or creating one similar. My plan for it will be on my talk page, please check it out. Let me know any of your thoughts.EliGamez (talk) 01:09, 31 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am excited to work on this article and improving it. I want to know your opinions on making this title Human trafficking in South and Latin America. Please let me know and check out my user page for the sources I will be using to revise this article. EliGamez (talk) 23:07, 18 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Good job splitting the information into concise and well thought out sections. Your sources were also up to date and scholarly. Your writing was clear and concise, and good job providing links. Excellent job adding multiple scholarly sources. Although for some sections only one source was used, perhaps you could add another section to add a different perspective. The sources are also quite recent as within the past decade. However, for the history section, perhaps you could add some older sources as well. My suggestions are to add more pictures to illustrate your writing. I would also edit the lead to include info on your new sections. There are a couple of sentences in passive voice but otherwise it is very readable with good grammar. Most importantly, I would also add more context to your sections like author and date in order to not make it seem like it is your opinion. For example, in the “Systemic Inequality” section, it seems as if your opinion is shown however that can be changed by adding more context to your sections. Overall, I would add more context to all of your sections. Atsang99 (talk) 04:02, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]