Talk:It Girl (Jason Derulo song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 12:36, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Derülo has promoted "It Girl" through live performances on televised shows, → To promote the song, Derülo performed the song live on Done

On July 29, 2011, "It Girl" was uploaded to Derülo's official YouTube account. → Specify that it was It Girl's audio that was uploaded, and no the video, as it is slightly ambiguous at the moment. Done
his peers were saying → Reword, as it is a bit conversational. Done

According to the sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing, → Remove Done
the song lyrically finds → the song's lyrics find Done

I'd change to "Formats and track listings", as there are different formats of the song. Done
What about the Sparks remix?
- Did not get a digital release. Oz ^talk 22:17, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Another well written article, hardly anything to correct. On hold for 7 days. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 13:56, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Passing :)