Talk:James Dean (2001 film)

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Good articleJames Dean (2001 film) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 1, 2009Good article nomineeNot listed
March 10, 2009Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

Strive for GA status[edit]

I have done a dramatic amount of work on this article, and I intend to get James Dean (film) to GA-status. However, the article still needs a Plot and Cast section, plus we need to add info from Awards. I'll see what I can do, but at the moment I'm somewhat busy. Wildroot (talk) 00:37, 15 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nevermind, I fixed everything. Wildroot (talk) 05:34, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:James Dean (film)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. Although it is a generally good article, it does have some problems with the prose. I did some copy editing to try to fix some of them. I also put in the url's for the newspaper articles. Below are my initial comments. I may add more later. —Mattisse (Talk) 22:47, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Examples of prose problems

  • "but realizes his father, Winton, begins to show a sudden lack of love for him." - he can not "begin to" show a "sudden" lack of love, as that doesn't make sense
Fixed, I think. Wildroot (talk) 23:29, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Whitmore is astonished" - "astonished" is too dramatic for a biography
Fixed. Wildroot (talk) 23:29, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "James' emotional mindset becomes more aggressive when he starts acting like a jerk to director George Stevens." - this language is too informal for an encyclopedia; also, I am not sure what you mean.
Fixed. Wildroot (talk) 23:35, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Angered with his life, James decides to conflict with his father once more" - grammatically incorrect - he decides to fight with his father? to clash with his father? to have conflict with his father? (this last is too clunky).
Fixed, I think. Wildroot (talk) 23:35, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Other problems

I fixed some of the wikilinking problems with general terms, but WP:MOS still says it's okay to link the characters in the Plot and Cast sections. For example, see The Dark Knight (although it's a comic book movie, not a biopic, but still...) Wildroot (talk) 23:47, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think you need to be clear that this is a biopic, and not necessarily the true story of Dean. (Were there not reviews that contrasted Dean's real life with the biopic? Was the biopic accurate? Was Dean really happy, having resolved all his problems by the time of his death?)
I know that this is only a movie and not a detailed depiction of Dean's life. I'm not stupid. Because this is a TV movie, it's almost impossible to find credible essays that fit under WP:RS to describe the historical liberties taken with this film. It's a miracle that I was able to find over 30 references to cite this article with. Wildroot (talk) 23:26, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I did not mean to imply that. It is just that the sources you use generally seem to look at James Dean as an icon. —Mattisse (Talk) 00:21, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for clarifying. Now I understand. Wildroot (talk) 01:02, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also, this biopic fails to convey much sense of Dean's personality nor is impact at the time. I am not sure how articles on other biopics handle this situation.
It refers to James Dean being a movie star and '50s icon. What more shall we say? Wildroot (talk) 23:29, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Should he be called "James" throughout, or should he be called "Dean"? (I don't know the answer.)

—Mattisse (Talk) 22:47, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Because this is a biopic, it is best to refer to him as James in the Plot and Cast sections. When showcasing the production of this film, calling him James Dean would be too redundant, so we should probably use that "last name rule" like other encyclopedias seem to do. Otherwise, it would be kinda awkward ("James Franco also carefully studied James' mannerisms by simultaneously watching his three films", etc.) Wildroot (talk) 23:26, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
More comments
Attached can mean a variety of meanings: an actor/actress who is discussions/talks for a role. It can also mean that Depp and Pitt found out they were being considered for the role, thus they told Warner Bros. that they would immediately sign on if they were offered. But Warner Bros. was more interested with Leonardo DiCaprio. Also The reference does mention that statement: Scroll to the very bottom: "Bill Gerber brought the JAMES DEAN project to TNT after several years in development at Warner Bros. Studios. During this time, many young actors were attached to star in the feature film, including Leonardo DiCaprio, Brad Pitt and Stephen Dorff." Wildroot (talk) 00:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lead does not reflect the article: "James Dean also explores the studio system and policies of 1950s Hollywood."
I took it out. Wildroot (talk) 00:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • He was an A-list actor - not really. Can you find a reference for that, as A-list sounds very establishment like Jennifer Aniston or Elizabeth Taylor.
A-list is a term that alludes to major movie stars, and/or the most bankable in the Hollywood movie industry. It's practically that same thing as a movie star. James Dean was both. Wildroot (talk) 01:02, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • he was an icon as many of your references state, and that he became an icon after he died (at least one of your sources state) - the suddenness of his death, before he actually became famous is described in one article.
James Dean has always been famous ever since he starred in East of Eden. However, after his death, he became more of a pop-culture icon. He still practically carries that "bad boy" image to this day. Wildroot (talk) 00:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I honestly don't know how that happened. I'll eventually fix this in the future. I took it out. Weird how stuff like that happens. Wildroot (talk) 00:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Not trying to be hard on you. I just would like to see this article become as good as it can. —Mattisse (Talk) 00:21, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No problem. Your doing great! Wildroot (talk) 00:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Further comments
  • A-list does not fit, unless you have a reference.

—Mattisse (Talk) 01:58, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I removed the A-list mention. Now it is ready for GA-status. Wildroot (talk) 06:24, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think it is close. The problem now is the article lead. Does it accurately reflect the content of the article? For example, is it a major point that "At one point, Michael Mann was set to direct with Leonardo DiCaprio starring in the lead role" that it needs to be in the lead?
The lead is suppose to summarize the article, and the fact that Michael Mann and DiCaprio were involved is pretty significant. Wildroot (talk) 23:36, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I fixed it. Wildroot (talk) 23:36, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • http://www.variety.com/article/VR1117850881.html?categoryid=14&cs=1 - This is used to reference "The film attracted 3.18 million viewers and received generally favorable reviews from critics" but the source says nothing about review and says 3.18 million was "attracted less than half the aud of the net's "Mists of Avalon" three weeks earlier (6.92m)", implying that was a poor showing.
Sorry, I must have read it wrong. Wildroot (talk) 23:36, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Wildroot (talk) 23:44, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

—Mattisse (Talk) 19:08, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Wildroot (talk) 23:44, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please check with Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines. For example, the plot should be written in a neutral manner. Phrases such as "becomes more devastating" is not neutral.
  • Prose problems mentioned above have not been fixed: eg "James begins to notice that his father has suddenly changed by showing a lack of love for his son."
  • I know you have worked hard on this article, but the trouble is that the whole issue of this biopic is meaningless without some comparision between Dean's life (or the myth regarding his life) and the biopic. When a reviewer says this biopic is a cliche, what does he mean by that? What aspect(s) of Dean's life in the biopic comes across as a cliché? (It is sort of like writing about a biopic of Nirvana's Kurt Cobain and not mentioning anything about how the biopic compares to the real person.) —Mattisse (Talk) 03:04, 29 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Final GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): There continue to be prose concerns as mentioned above. Examples:
  • James begins to notice that his father has suddenly changed by showing a lack of love for his son. (contradictory wording)
  • The entire situation becomes more devastating when Mildred dies. (fails to be neutral wording in plot section)
b (MoS): Follows MoS
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): Well referenced b (citations to reliable sources): Sources are reliable c (OR): No OR
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): Fails to set biopic in context of James Dean's real life and sudden death, resulting in iconic status b (focused): Remains focused on subject
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias: Plot section contains POV wording
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Regretfully, I must fail the article. When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it have it reassessed. Most of this article is very good. —Mattisse (Talk) 20:47, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Looking back at this review, I'm sorry to say that Mattisse was largely unfair. The GAN policy asks for a seven day period for the review, whereas you waited five days. I could have easily fixed the concerns within two days. Also, what's so POV over the issue of Dean being a movie star or an A-list actor. Who cares? Those two definitions are practically the same thing. I do not see how this article "fails to set biopic in context of James Dean's real life and sudden death, resulting in iconic status." It's mentioned towards the end of the Plot section, plus there's info in the Writing section that displays the historical accuracy/inaccuracy of this film. That's my rant of the day. Take with it what you want. Wildroot (talk) 03:18, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
James Dean was an cultural icon, as described in his article. That is the reason he was chosen to have a biographical film made about him. To fail to put the film in this context is a major flaw, in my opinion, as well as the prose problems noted. I am sorry you feel the way you do, but you can fix the problems and renominate. Or, as I suggested, have it reassessed. I noted that most of the article was very good. —Mattisse (Talk) 03:27, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, I think I overreacted. Wildroot (talk) 06:01, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:James Dean (film)/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Hello, I will be reviewing this page later today. At first glance, the page looks strong in terms of content. I imagine that copy-editing will be the central aspect of my review. —Erik (talk • contrib) 15:24, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Broad suggestions

I am going to start with some broad suggestions for improvement. Copy-editing suggestions will come later. That way, we can neatly address each group of issues. Here are the suggestions:

  • File:JamesDeanfilmposter2.jpg is a DVD cover image, not a poster image. I recommend re-uploading with a correct file name and using {{Non-free video cover}} in the description. Also needs a source. See File:Kings Go Forth DVD cover.jpg as an example.
  • In the "Cast" section, boldface should be removed. The formatting is usually reserved for multi-line items so readers can pick out names with ease. This is not necessary to do here.
  • The "Production" section has "Writing", "Development", and "Casting" subsections. It is understandable that there is not enough context for a "Filming" subsection, but I think that either the headings could be re-titled to be broader or some content can be re-shuffled so filming detail does not erroneously fall under "Development".
  • Have you considered adding a free image of James Franco to the article, likely the "Cast" section? The article comments on the similarity, after all.

I will try to do some copy-editing myself, but I will keep it minor and leave it up to you for any problematic sentences that I may not be able to address. Let me know if you have any questions about these broad suggestions! —Erik (talk • contrib) 20:59, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I have already fixed your general concerns above. What's next? Wildroot (talk) 00:51, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Plot suggestions are below. For the image, can the caption be replaced with a duplication of the "uncanny resemblance" reference from the "Casting" subsection? I think it would provide greater justification. Also suggest tweaking the "purpose of use" on the image description page with explaining the significance. (The ten points aren't needed; these came from a time when editors like me were trying to cover our butts too much.) —Erik (talk • contrib) 18:45, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Plot suggestions

As you can tell, I gave the "Plot" section a minor copy-editing. There are a few points that could be clarified in this section:

  • The section starts off with calling James Dean "eight years old", but after that, there is no true context for age. Like what year was it when he was eight, and around how old was he when he started his acting career?
  • "James asks his mother why Winton shows a lack of love for his son, but she only blames the family problems on herself. The entire situation becomes more devastating for young James when Mildred dies of cancer in 1940." The first sentence seems disjointed... maybe clarify that she blames herself for Winton's lack of love? For the second sentence, "devastating" is a dramatic word choice. Can the sentence be rewritten to be a little clearer about how the situation becomes worse? Is it hard to get by, or is there just no love between anyone?
  • "James moves to Hollywood in April 1954 to begin filming for Eden, where he upsets Raymond Massey (playing his screen father) with his method acting." Can it be explained how Massey got upset? Too convincing, too over-the-top, what?
  • I have mixed feelings about the last couple of sentences. The "final shot" sentence and the narrative sentence are out-of-universe in mentioning a technical detail then a thematic detail. Maybe a way to address this is to write the "final shot" sentence to be pseudo-thematic in how the father accompanied his son this time?

Hope you don't mind this section-by-section review! I'm around Wikipedia these days only sporadically. I will go through the "Background" section later today. —Erik (talk • contrib) 18:45, 28 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I addressed the concerns and figured some of this stuff is already covered in the Cast section and simply removed unneeded information. Hope that works. Also, you should check the last sentence of the Plot section, see if it needs to be rewritten. I tried to write it from James' POV. Wildroot (talk) 06:12, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Background suggestions
  • This sentence is unclear: "Johnny Depp and Brad Pitt were under serious consideration for the lead role,[6] while both actors were also attached to the part.[7]" Does "attached" mean that they were interested in it? Or does it mean that they were contracted? The latter would mean there is some redundancy to fix.
Yes, "attached" means they were both interested in the role. I'll admit that statement is kinda written weird. Wildroot (talk) 04:45, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "However, McAnuff..." Is there a way to write it without resorting to "However"? Like a clearer explanation as to why?
Fixed. Wildroot (talk) 04:48, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Stephen Dorff was considered. Was this before or after the casting call? Maybe he could be paired with Ethan Hawke as two strong candidates when Rydell was attached to the film.
This was before. Wildroot (talk) 04:45, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Release suggestions
  • Can more reviews be found for this film? There are print reviews from the Orlando Sentinel, the Detroit Free Press, and the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. Let me know if you need help viewing them.
I'm sorry, I don't think I can find any reviews. I need help on this one. TV movies are harder to research. Wildroot (talk) 04:48, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I gave the article an overall copy-editing, so I hope you can address my concerns about various sentences above and about additional reviews. —Erik (talk • contrib) 17:10, 3 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Article is looking great now! Let me see if I can't grab a couple of print reviews and display some relevant passages here so the critical reception can be slightly expanded. After that, I'll pass it as a Good Article! —Erik (talk • contrib) 14:05, 4 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I decided that the presence of additional reviews is not a big deal; what exists suffices for the Good Article status. If you still have an interest in adding other reviews anyway, let me know, and I can incorporate them. —Erik (talk • contrib) 14:53, 10 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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