Talk:Jennifer McFalls

Hi I am planning to make edits and contributions to this page. If anyone has any comments or feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Jennifer Mcfalls has been a big part of softball and she should be recognized for all of her accomplishments.

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For the Jennifer Mcfalls page since there is not much about her I will be adding both personal life information as well as information about her softball career/coaching career. I will discuss early life and how she got involved in softball. I will also talk about her education and where she went to school, this will include what she studied at A&M. The section on her time at A&M will include who she was coached by and her position on the team as well as her batting average. I will also include the impact that she had on her college team and how she got to where she is today because of her softball accomplishments. I will then talk about her importance on the Olympic softball team, and also discuss her coaching career. This will include her coaching at University of Texas as well as her coaching for the Dallas Charge professional softball team. Awards that she received will also be included. The table of contents will include, Early life, college career, Olympic team, and coaching career. The sources that I will be using will be :

• Rvara14 As you said, you are going to add more information about her personal life and her softball career. Actually, Do you think it is possible to connect these two parts together? 03:51, 7 November 2015 (UTC)Thisislily (talk)
• Thisislily Yes I do think it is possible to connect her softball career as well as her personal life. Since softball has been apart of her family and has been in her life for so long it also apart of her personal life as well. Thank You for the feedback.

Raquel, I would like to hear more about the details of her coaching such as her records as a coach and any significant milestones she has reached. I think that this would be helpful in comparing her success to other coaches in the NPF or other softball associations. Jaylinclevenger (talk) 23:20, 7 November 2015 (UTC)

Raquel, since softball has been a part of Jennifer McFalls life you might want to add in information about how it's a part of her personal life. Whether she had other members in her family in softball or anything related between family and softball. I think this would further connect who Jennifer is personally and her impact in the softball community. --Frivera14 (talk) 23:02, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

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Editing

While this topic has most, if not all, the available facts necessary for Jennifer Mc Falls story, the sentence structure and editing were terrible. A high school English II student would have been a better choice. As an added fact, concerning our common home town, Grand Prairie, Texas, the four Little League fields, just two blocks south of our house, where I played four years of baseball, has been restructured into a very nice softball complex dedicated to Jennifer. Hallowed ground for me, I have no complaint that this ball player is so honored. 2600:6C56:4C08:68B:F894:A922:E7DF:BB4 (talk) 07:08, 16 November 2021 (UTC)