Talk:John Paul Edwards

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Puffery[edit]

This doesn't seem to use impartial language, e.g. "famous" group f/64, "important" collection of photos. I suggest changing to a more neutral tone, or finding sources to back that up. SonorianBnS (talk) 03:30, 18 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Done. -Lopifalko (talk) 05:31, 18 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]