Talk:Jon Anabo/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:17, 10 November 2017 (UTC)
Will review. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 09:17, 10 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early career[edit]
- "Anabo attended Armijo High School before playing college football at Vallejo Junior College " - before going on to play college football at Vallejo Junior College Done
- "In 1961, Anabo transferred to Fresno State to play for the Bulldogs" - mention it was the Fresno State Bulldogs and wikilink it since it is the first time it will be mentioned in the prose Done
- "Anabo was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset over the University of the Pacific in the final seconds of the game." - He was credited for leading the Bulldogs to an upset victory of the University of the Pacific in the game's final seconds Done
- "Fresno State defeated Bowling Green 36–6" - reword to Fresno State defeated the Bowling Green Falcons 36–6 Done
- Wikilink United Press International Done
- "In 1962, Anabo and Carter were described as the "best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast". - described by whom?
- The source doesn't specifically say. It says "Their pair of quarterbacks, Jon Anabo and Beau Carter, are billed as the best 1-2 quarterback punch on the West Coast" Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:32, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- Add a wikilink to touchdown again to help those unfamilar with football Done
Professional career[edit]
- Wikilink the first mention of Cleveland Browns, the Edmonton Eskimos and the Canadian Football League in the prose Done
- Perhaps an explanation of what position Walter Roberts played in will help non-football fans Done
Overall a good effort has been made. On hold until the minor quibbles have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 10:33, 10 November 2017 (UTC)
- I'm helping Rob with his reviews. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:58, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
- Multiple facts in the infobox are unsourced, like the DOB, POB, height, and weight. MX (✉ • ✎) 14:21, 10 November 2017 (UTC)
- I think these come from the Canadian Pro Football Encyclopedia source. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:26, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Then I suggest that they be directly linked to the encyclopedia source. MWright96 (talk) 19:12, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- @BU Rob13: Can you confirm? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:25, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Then I suggest that they be directly linked to the encyclopedia source. MWright96 (talk) 19:12, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- MWright96, how should we add the source to the infobox? When you try to do it, it looks kind of weird. [1] WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 22:19, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Can't find an appropriate way to add the source so I have moved to the quarterback section. MWright96 (talk) 12:40, 17 November 2017 (UTC)