Talk:Keanolani/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
Criteria[edit]
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- No DAB links
- No dead links
- No missing citations
Prose Suggestions[edit]
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
- You may want to expand the lead, possibly including facts about her illegitimacy, or her death.
- Her father's husband Keaupuni was not biological father as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855. I think this is garbled, I believe it should be:
- Her husband Keaupuni was not the biological father of the baby as was later attested by Mele, a witness in the divorce suit between him and Maheha in 1855.