Talk:Kelly Kelly/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
I will review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:04, 17 March 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "She made her debut on the first episode of the weekly television program, June 13, 2006," modify a bit, perhaps 'of the weekly television program on June..'
- "On the October 29 episode of Raw, Kelly won a battle royal, to earn a match" comma after royal not needed
- "She made her debut on the April 30 episode of SmackDown," comma not needed
- "She went on to feud with Lay-Cool, gaining and ally in Tiffany." an ally
- The WWE external link is a 404, looks like they again modified all their roster links on the site.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass it once those issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:16, 19 March 2011 (UTC)