Talk:Klaxons/GA2

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

There are four deadlinks. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In reference 35, BBC News should not be linked. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The lead needs to be expanded to meet WP:LEAD. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Musical style" needs additional verification and sources. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, every section needs additional verification. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Reference 22 is a bare URL. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
There is inconsistency with dating. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Inconsistency between NME and NME.com. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
There should not be any one-sentence paragraphs. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
File:Klaxons Queens May Ball 2007.jpg needs additional information. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Please see here, for some great fixes on your references. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The article really needs to go through a thorough copyediting. CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

I am quick-failing this article because it meets the third decree on the quick-fail criteria. I think that if you copyedit the article, and fix all the reference problems, it would pass GAN if it were renominated. Sorry, CrowzRSA 01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]