Talk:Kumkum Bhagya/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Daniel Case (talk · contribs) 04:20, 13 February 2020 (UTC)

I'm sorry that after this has languished on the nominations for nine months it must come down to this, but ...

... I can only quick-fail this article, for two reasons:

• "20 years later", the last section of the plot summary, is as tagged in dire need of cleanup ... in fact, I'd just start from scratch and try to write something that will be properly divided into paragraphs and use proper grammar and style. That subsection was frankly in much better shape at the time the article was nominated. Letting this happen during a GA nomination is sloppy.

• More importantly, there are huge swaths of the article that are uncited ... almost the whole cast section, the table entries in the "Broadcast" section, "Streaming", and "Soundtrack". In an article 162K long with 305 footnotes, this is appalling. It should certainly not be a GA, and I will be tagging it with {{refimprove}} after I'm done here.

I do not think any of these can be remedied in a week, not when these flaws were obvious during the whole pendency of the nomination, not when someone took so much care to cite other portions of the article.

✗ Fail Daniel Case (talk) 04:20, 13 February 2020 (UTC)