Talk:Kwinana Freeway/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 22:30, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   • "The interchange is a diamond interchange, with Kwinana Freeway free flowing, and includes additional bus only ramps connecting to the median lanes of the freeway.", I don't see the need for "with Kwinana Freeway free flowing".

   Removed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

   • The sentence "400 metres (1,300 ft)[8] south of Canning Highway is a partial Y interchange with Manning Road, consisting of a northbound entrance ramp and southbound exit ramp." should be reworded so it does not begin with a numeral.

   Fixed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

   • When mentioning Kwinana Freeway in prose, I would add "the" in front of it so it reads better.

   Fixed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

   • "the freeway realigns itself south-east" sounds awkward.

   Changed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   "Through the southern suburbs of Perth, Kwinana Freeway travels south as the boundary between suburbs", which suburbs does it travel as the boundary between?

   There's about fourteen of them, which are mentioned throughout the subsection. I changed it to "...between various suburbs", and added mentions of some more suburbs - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I will place the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough4872 00:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)

I will now pass the article. Dough4872 03:53, 10 May 2013 (UTC)