Talk:Larabanga Mosque/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 11:30, 24 March 2015 (UTC)

• Again, the lead is too short.
  • Expanded

• "Muslim town of Larabanga" ? As I am not sure about whether the word Muslim is appropriate or not, I would advise you to check other Good Articles whether such phrases are used or not.
  • You are right. I have corrected it to Islamic

• Please link Ghana.
  • Ghana is linked in the lead

• "According to legend" - it should be according to a legend.
  • Done

• "Larabanga is one of the eight ancient..." keep this sentence and the next one in a separate paragraph. Because it has nothing to do with Ayuba, where it is stitched.
  • Done

• Between 1421 and 1970s, isnt there any more details?
  • I found this book reference [1] of 2014 and I have added this reference with some additional text. Otherwise, the book gives almost the same details as already given in the article.

• "it would stop deterioration"- make it "protect from being getting damaged"
  • Done

• Please link WMF
  • Done

• Was Ayuba really the architect which is been mentioned in the infobox?
  • The latest reference of 2014, added now, also gives the name of Ayuba as the likely builder.

RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 11:30, 24 March 2015 (UTC)

• @Royroydeb: Thanks for the review.--Nvvchar. 05:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)