Talk:Let Your Head Go

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Let Your Head Go/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This will run over two days! --K. Peake 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead[edit]

Pipe electro to Electro (music) in the infobox
"also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers." to avoid the implication they contributed additional production role
"In 2004, it was included on the video album" → "In 2004, the former was included on the video album,"
"after her record company went" → "after Beckham's record company went"
"It is Beckham's" → "The song is Beckham's"
""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "It is a"
Pipe electro to Electro (music)
"by Beckham in the United Kingdom," → "by Beckham in the UK,"
Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor with the wikilink

Background[edit]

Where is the second solo album sourced?
A more accurate description than describing her solo career as a failure would be rapping career/style per the source

Composition[edit]

"also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers."
Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitar
Pipe mastered to Mastering (audio)
Add info about the meaning of the song to the second para

I'm not sure what you mean here Alex ^{reach me!} 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "Musically, "Let Your Head Go" is a" but the last genre is not sourced
Pipe electro to Electro (music)
Wikilink Racked per MOS:LINK2SECT
"and vintage Cyndi Lauper."" → "and vintage Cyndi Lauper"." per MOS:QUOTE
"just a few years prior."" → "just a few years prior"." per above
"feel, boasting "boasted a tune" → "feel and "boasted a tune"

Reception[edit]

Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor on the img text with the wikilink
"received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
"Andy White, the song is" → "White, the song is" per his full name already having been used (The Independent is sufficient to identify which person of this surname he is)
"For Jon O'Brien of" → "For O'Brien of"
"Justin Myers from the Official Charts Company" → "Myers from the Official Charts Company"
Use the staff of introduction for Hollywood.com
"of her vocal proficiency."" → "of her vocal proficiency"." per MOS:QUOTE
"In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
"with Sophie Ellis Bextor's" → "with Sophie Ellis-Bextor's" with the wikilink
Pipe Eurochart Hot 100 Singles to European Hot 100 Singles

Music video[edit]

Pipe wire hanger to Clothes hanger
"She wakes from" → "Beckham wakes from"
"She walks between" → "Beckham walks between"
MOS:QUOTE issues in the last para and repeated instances of full names when these have already been used

Track listings[edit]

Good

Credits and personnel[edit]

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts[edit]

Wouldn't it be better to list the entries as "Let Your Head Go/This Groove"?

Weekly charts[edit]

Pipe Romanian Top 100 to Romanian record charts

Year-end charts[edit]

Good

References[edit]

Copyvio score looks great at 25.2%!!!
Wikilink Omnibus Press on ref 5
Wikilink Telstar Records on ref 11
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 13
Wikilink Racked to itself on ref 15 per MOS:LINK2SECT
Wikilink Hollywood.com on ref 18
Pipe The Belfast News Letter to News Letter on ref 23

Final comments and verdict[edit]

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this went as expected! --K. Peake 20:45, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Kyle Peake Thanks for another amazing review! See my comment above. Alex ^{reach me!} 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

By meaning of the song, I mean an analysis of sorts for the lyrical meaning please. K. Peake 07:26, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Kyle Peake I'm afraid there's no info on this other than the David Sinclair book one. Alex ^{reach me!} 03:23, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: Is there any updates for this review? Is there more things to be sorted, or are we done? — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 01:00, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, I did some copy editing for you but this is ready to go! --K. Peake 06:46, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]