Talk:Letter to My Daughter/GA1

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 01:03, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Nominator: Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk)

Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:03, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

1: Well-written

Check for WP:LEAD:

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    • The material is not contentious and does not require inline citations.
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    • Check for Provide an accessible overview (MOS:INTRO):  Done
      • Major Point 1: Background "By the time it was published, Angelou had written ... had become "a major autobiographical voice of the time"" (summarised well in the lead)
      • Major Point 2: Overview "Angelou has no daughters herself, ... wisdom gained throughout her long life. ... Letter consists of 28 short essays, ... dedicated to "the daughter she never had"." (summarised well in the lead)
      • Major Point 3: Reviews "Reviews of the book were ... both homespun and "hokey"" (summarised well in the lead)
    • Check for Relative emphasis:  Done
      • Major Point 1: Background "By the time it was published, Angelou had written ... had become "a major autobiographical voice of the time"" (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
      • Major Point 2: Overview "Angelou has no daughters herself, ... wisdom gained throughout her long life. ... Letter consists of 28 short essays, ... dedicated to "the daughter she never had"." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
      • Major Point 3: Reviews "Reviews of the book were ... both homespun and "hokey"" (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
    • Check for Opening paragraph (MOS:BEGIN):  Done
      • Check for First sentence (WP:LEADSENTENCE):  Done
        • "Letter to My Daughter (2009) is the third book of essays by African American writer and poet Maya Angelou." good
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      • Check for Abbreviations and synonyms (MOS:BOLDSYN): None
      • Check for Foreign language (MOS:FORLANG): None
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Check for WP:LAYOUT:  Done

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      • Paragraphs should be short enough to be readable, but long enough to develop an idea. One-sentence paragraphs are unusually emphatic, and should be used sparingly. (WP:BETTER).
      • Fix "Psychologists Eranda Jayawickreme and Marie J.C. Forgearda, who called the essays in Letter to My Daughter "illuminating", cited it as an example of a non-scientific, interdisciplinary text to use to teach positive psychology." in the Reviews section.
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      • EL to YouTube clip.
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    • Check for Neologisms (WP:PEA): None
  3. Check for Offensive material (WP:F***): None

Check for WP:MOSFICT:  Done

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None
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Check for WP:BLP: NA

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2: Verifiable with no original research

 Done

Check for WP:RS:  Done

  1. Check for the material (WP:RSVETTING): (not contentious)  Done
    • Is it contentious?: No
    • Does the ref indeed support the material?:
  2. Check for the author (WP:RSVETTING):  Done
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Check for inline citations WP:MINREF:  Done

  1. Check for Direct quotations:  Done
    • "a major autobiographical voice of the time".[1]
    • "the daughter she never had".[2]
    • "hokey".[3]
    • "On the Pulse of Morning" ...[6]
    • "without a doubt ... America's most visible black woman autobiographer".[12]
    • "a major autobiographical voice of the time".[1]
    • "a work of art that eludes description" ... [4]
    • "WIP" ("Works in Progress") ... [3] (Random check on Source 3: unsuccessful, not in source)
    • "the best thing that ever happened to me in my life",[3] (Random check on Source 3: successful, source says "What prompted her to write this book? "I had no daughters," she says. "I had a son who was the best thing that ever happened to me in my life. But in reality I have lots of daughters.")
    • "end with the kind of wisdom that, depending on your taste, qualifies as either homespun or hokey".[3] (Random check on Source 3: successful, source says "Most end with the kind of wisdom that, depending on your taste, qualifies as either homespun or hokey.")
    • "We are more alike than unalike".[14]
    • "short epistles",[3]
    • "the daughter she never had".[15]
    • "...some women who mothered me through dark and bright days" ... [16]
    • "...one woman who allows me to be a daughter to her, even today" ... [16]
    • "women not born to me but who allow me to mother them" ... [16]
    • "At moments in the book she sounds like an elderly relative, distraught at the wayward manners of the young," ... [3]
    • "outlived the need for social convention".[3]
    • "old fashioned wisdom" ... [17]
    • "a slim volume packed with nourishing nuggets of wisdom".[17]
    • "Angelou delivers with her signature passion and fire" [18] (Random check on Source 18: unsuccessful, not in source 18, actually the citation should be to source 2 which is by the reviewer Karen Algeo Krizman, source 2 says "Pros: Whether recalling a brutal beating at the hands of an old lover, delivering an admonition against vulgarity ("Politicians must be told if they continue to sink into the mud of obscenity, they will proceed alone") or simply singing the praises of the South and red beans and rice, Angelou delivers with her signature passion and fire. These are short essays that are easy to take in during brief moments of quiet; yet, each delivers a powerful message.")
    • "easy to take in during brief moments of quiet" ... [18] (Random check on Source 18: unsuccessful, not in source 18, actually the citation should be to source 2 which is by the reviewer Karen Algeo Krizman, as above)
    • "written in Angelou's beautiful, poetic style" ... [18] (Random check on Source 18: successful, source says "Written in Angelou's beautiful, poetic style, the essays feel like warm advice from a beloved aunt or grandmother, whose wisdom you know was earned.")
    • "advice from a beloved aunt or grandmother, whose wisdom you know was earned". [18] (Random check on Source 18: successful, above)
    • "one cannot help but be struck by how much Angelou has overcome and how far she has come".[19]
    • "filled with life and generosity and a deep yearning to pass her story on to other young women".[19]
    • "colloquial and from the heart".[19]
    • "fluid narrative" ... [19]
    • "The kernels of insight and, yes, wisdom in this small volume will stay with the reader for a long time".[19]
    • "illuminating" [20]
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3: Broad in its coverage

 Done

Not all sources are accessible. Random check on few accessible sources (2,3,18).

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    2. Check for All material that is referenced is covered:
      • Random check on few accessible sources (2,3,18).
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b. Focused:
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4: Neutral

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4. Fair representation without bias:  Done

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  10. Check for Words to watch (WP:YESPOV):  Done
  11. Check for Attributing and specifying biased statements (WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV):  Done
  12. Check for Fringe theories and pseudoscience (WP:PSCI): None
  13. Check for Religion (WP:RNPOV): None

5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes

6: Images  Done (NFC with valid FUR)

Images:
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6: Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  Done

  1. Check for copyright tags (WP:TAGS):  Done
    • Lead Image (Letter to My Daughter.jpg): This image is of book cover(s), and the copyright for it is most likely owned either by the artist who created the cover(s) or the publisher of the book(s). It is believed that the use of low-resolution images of book covers (1) to illustrate an article discussing the book in question, and (2) on the English-language Wikipedia, hosted on servers in the United States by the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation, qualifies as fair use under United States copyright law. Other use of this image, on Wikipedia or elsewhere, might be copyright infringement..
  2. Check for copyright status:  Done (Non-free content)
  3. Check for non-free content (WP:NFC):  Done (Yes)
  4. Check for valid fair use rationales (WP:FUR):  Done (valid)
    • Source (WP:NFCC#4): Amazon.com
    • Use in article (WP:NFCC#7): Letter to My Daughter
    • Purpose of use in article (WP:NFCC#8): to serve as the primary means of visual identification at the top of the article dedicated to the work in question.
    • Minimal use (WP:NFCC#3): This is the only time this image will be used. It has low resolution, and is used to illustrate the subject.

6: Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  Done

  1. Check for image relevance (WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE):  Done
    • Relevant to the article
  2. Check for Images for the lead (WP:LEADIMAGE):  Done
    • Appropriate & Representative
  3. Check for suitable captions (WP:CAPTION):  Done
    • succinct and informative

As per the above checklist, the issues identified are:

  • Single-sentence paragraphs should be avoided.
Done, by moving the sentence to the end of the first paragraph and re-wording it a bit to better fit the context.
  • "WIP" ("Works in Progress") ... [3] (Random check on Source 3: unsuccessful, not in source 3)
Added more specific ref.
  • "Angelou delivers with her signature passion and fire" [18] (Random check on Source 18: unsuccessful, not in source 18, actually the citation should be to Source 2 which is by the reviewer Karen Algeo Krizman)
Done.
  • "easy to take in during brief moments of quiet" ... [18] (Random check on Source 18: unsuccessful, not in source 18, actually the citation should be to Source 2 which is by the reviewer Karen Algeo Krizman)
Done.
  • Can you please confirm for the rest of the content, including the other direct quotations whose sources are inaccessible to me, that their inline citations are correct?
Re-checked everything, and all refs should be accurate now. Thanks for catching the errors here.

This article is a very promising GA nominee. I'm glad to see your work here. I'm putting the article on hold. All the best! --Seabuckthorn ♥ 14:20, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I appreciate it. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 23:34, 9 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

OK, everything looks good now. Passing the article to GA status. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 01:05, 10 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Congrats, Christine! --Another Believer (Talk) 02:38, 10 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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