Talk:Lionel Matthews/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:05, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:05, 6 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Just a reminder this is here, Sturm. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:16, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK.
Images appropriately licensed
The citation refers to being appointed in command of the British North Borneo Constabulary, but the main body does not explain how this happened.
Put Staunton into title case
Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:37, 14 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sturm, all done, I think. The sources aren't clear about how he took control of the police, only that unofficial control passed to him when the civilian internees left. This implies that prior to that point, the civilian internees had control of the police, but the sources don't actually say that. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:18, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

What about the citation referencing the governor? Can you dig up anything on that?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:23, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I completely missed that bit. Added. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:33, 15 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]