Talk:Lisa on Ice/GA1
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- "In order to pass and get the straight A grades she desires" I would change the verb "get" to one of a more specific meaning.
Other than a couple of minor changes, this is the only change I would suggest. I'll leave it up to you to change it, because it does at the moment still make sense - just I feel it would be better with a less vague verb. Otherwise, feel free to have a look at my changes and make any alterations you feel adequate.
In the long run, good luck with any future improvements with the article. It's another good read, well-structured and easily meets the GA criteria.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
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