Talk:List of Camp Lazlo characters/Archive 1

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Needs cleanup

The whole thing looks like it was thrown together by a 2nd grader in 5 minutes. Someone should really clean this up. Wizrdwarts 22:27, 11 April 2006 (UTC) I looked through the whole thing, and it's also chock-full of vandalism, I removed some of it. Wizrdwarts 23:02, 11 April 2006 (UTC)

Removed Junk

Took out this notice at the bottom - that's what talk pages are for.

=== To The Person Who Was Editing This Article === Mainly not all of them. But to this person, learn how to [[spell]] and punctuate correctly. It is very irritating to the other editors and readers when they have to fix your mistakes. Please read the whole article before editing it.

Also, I took out a bunch of references to erotic fanfiction, that does not belong here at all. Craig Sniffen 17:24, 1 July 2006 (UTC)

Campers' Names

Why are some Wikipedians changing the names of the campers and are some of the names true? Squirepants101 21:04, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Hey. Can you add screen caps of all the Acorn Flats scouts? Joanna, 14 September 2006, 21:33 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't get any screenshots because I don't have a camera. Squirepants101 21:01, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

There is another camper i saw in one of the episodes it looked like a persian cat. —Preceding unsigned comment added by LongBay (talk • contribs)

There may have been a cat there, but where did you get its name? Did you make it up or was it in a real episode? Squirepants101 11:39, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

And by the way, please sign your comments with four tildes (~). Squirepants101 11:40, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

Squirrel Scouts

Hey. Can you add screen caps of all the Acorn Flats scouts? Joanna, 15 Sep 2006, 18:17 (UTC)

Cruft?

I think some of this is starting to look like cruft, like "she hates Norman." Come on, the Squirrel Scouts don't appear in a lot of episodes. Squirepants101 16:58, 17 September 2006 (UTC) Also, I'm a little skeptical about Candi Milo and Grey DeLisle working on this show because in the credits I've seen, their names weren't listed. Squirepants101 16:59, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

Squirepants101. Which names have the grey squirrel, the purple mouse and the light green tapir from Acorn Flats?

Well, actually, the characters have no name and not mentioned. So it's unknown.--esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 23:21, 24 September 2006 (UTC)

Toodie?

According to Lazlo Loves a Parade (could be seen online), Toodie is a squirrel, but this article claims that she's a rabbit. Squirepants101 20:52, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

Well, I think it was mentioned that in Love Sick, it was mentioned her name was Tootie. So, she is the squirrel. Who put rabbit?--esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 03:07, 23 September 2006 (UTC)

The rabbit is Amber

Well, which name has the purple poodle? Joanna

Hey! Is there true, that a poodle's name is Misty and a tapir's name's Sue? Joanna

Why are you adding those characters if you don't know if they're real or not? This isn't a fansite. Squirepants101 15:40, 23 September 2006 (UTC)

Bill

Why can't I get to the Bill the aardvark article i made? Is Bill really a aardvark? What happen to the article about Bill? Bill was made article by me.-User:Kongsaurus12

Was Bill's article deleted or not?

I don't understand what happen to the article Bill (Camp Lazlo)

I redirected it because I thought it was unneccessary. He's just a minor character, he doesn't need an article. Squirepants101 22:50, 25 September 2006 (UTC)

But there are articles squirrel scouts minor charcters who have articles and Your every selfish,User:Squirepants101 this is User:Kongsaurus12

I'm going to warn you about personal attacks like that (calling me selfish, that's an insult). And I agree that some shows have articles about minor characters such as Fred Fredburger (used to be one, but now is recurring), but that's because he's extremely popular (and maybe because the list of characters article was getting too large). Keeper of the Reaper and Be A-Fred, Be Very A-Fred revealed a lot about him, however some of the Bean Scouts are different stories. Not much has been revealed about them, so they wouldn't need their own article when their summaries are only a sentence long. P.S. I did not create those articles about Gretchen, Patsy, and Nina. Someone else did. Squirepants101 22:11, 26 September 2006 (UTC)

Sorry about that But I'm Making a new article about Bill and please do not redirect it

If you're going to ask, I did not redirect your article (Bill (Camp Kidney). Someone else did and tagged it for speedy deletion. They redirected it because you were creating a fork. Bill still does not need his own article. He barely does anything on Camp Lazlo. If you created an article of that, it would be like creating an article for every minor character in Camp Lazlo. If you did that, what would be the point of the minor character list. Squirepants101 22:41, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

It's it true that Bill's the aardvark?-User:Kongsaurus12

Protected

I've noticed that this article has been protected, so lets discuss our disputes. I've noticed that some users have been creating unnecessary articles (even a copy of this page which I redirected). I do not think they're neccessary because all that info can fit right here. I've also seen users adding fake info to the Squirrel Scouts, like fake voice actors. Any comments? Squirepants101 23:01, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

That's true. Some characters' names are never mentioned or yet to be mentioned. So, no people should add info you're not sure. Also, some people added info that is not true. That's not right! That is the cause of the protection of the site!! Stop it!! --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 00:21, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

I've unprotected this article, please bring up disputed items here on the talk page. — xaosflux ^Talk 23:09, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

Although this article is now unprotected, I've noticed another thing: the main articles of the characters. I think we should keep some of them (such as main characters and maybe some of the reccurring), but I think we should redirect those articles about the Squirrel Scouts. Squirepants101 23:19, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

Pictures

We need pictures of Samson, Dave, Ping Pong, Edward, Dung bettles, Lemmings, Slinkman, and the rest of the bean scouts. We got pictures of the squirrel scouts. Why not? ~LongBay~

LongBay. Which pics present the squirrel scouts? Joanna

Mainly, it's easy to acquire the pictures (I can do them myself but I wouldn't do it currently).--esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 15:51, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

Esanchez7587. Which Squirrel Scouts do the pics present? Joanna

Thanks for the Lemming and Sampson pictures. We still need pictures for Slinkman, Edward, Chup & Skip, Dave, Ping Pong, and the other bean scouts ~LongBay~ We need pictres of Slinkman, Beetles, Edward, and the Bean Scots

We need Pics Slinkman, Edward, Chip&Skip, and the other Bean Scouts!!

We will find the rest colav10.[1]

Peer Review

List of characters in Camp Lazlo

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I added a Slinkman article it needs more information. Expand the article. ~LongBay~

I rediected it. I think it's enough main articles of the characters (for now). Squirepants101 12:04, 4 October 2006 (UTC)

We need a Slinkman article. We got an article for Amber, Patsy and the squirrel scouts. They dont appear as much as Slinkman does.

Confused...

I remember that a long time ago, I was able to tell the Squirrel Scouts. Now, in Wiki here, it got me confused but for sure, the info on Susie is completely incorrect!! I can't remember who was Susie but it wasn't that character mentioned already! I think it was the dog...someone help! Any episode, check the credits! Mianly maybe on Dosey Doe... --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 01:59, 7 October 2006 (UTC)

Names of Bean Scouts

I removed the names of Bean Scouts who are minor characters,expect for Milt.They're names were revealed never what scout they are.So I gave them the name of animal they are.Ex:Walrus Scout,Strok Scout,and Aardvark scout.-User:Kongsaurus12

Redirected another page

Today, I redirected another page about a minor camper and it was Honey. She had her own article under a different name and I redirected it here, but the person who created that article created another article about Honey. I redirected that one. Why are users creating these kinds of articles anyways when all that information can go right here? Especially when they are only a few sentences long. This article isn't even 30 kilobytes (it used to be big until someone removed all the minor characters, not campers. I created an article for those minor characters). Squirepants101 00:06, 2 October 2006 (UTC) Hey there, Squirepants101! What's the Poodle Scout's name?

That's very irrelevant to the discussion here and why are you asking me that when the Squirrel Scouts don't appear often. Check the credits for the names of the Squirrel Scouts. Squirepants101 21:45, 2 October 2006 (UTC)

Hey! I know! Suzie is The Poodle scout. Joanna

New articles about other Camp Lazlo characters

Can I create a lot of articles about other Camp Lazlo characters? Joanna

like who?67.175.138.202 03:04, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

Actually, only the main and recurring characters can have articles, which are:

Lazlo
Raj
Clam
Lumpus
Edward
Samson
Patsy
Nina
Gretchen

Because a lot were mentioned about them. The others, not much. Unless you give a reasoning why they need a whole article, after a small problem with another user. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 03:12, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

List of the Squirrel Scouts

There are ten female campers from Acorn Flats:

Patsy
Nina
Gretchen
Honey
Amber
Toodie
Terrifield
Almondine
Suzie
Misty

In reality, I don't think that's a correct list. I mean, "Terrefield", "Suzie", & "Misty". I don't think they're mentioned (except Susie, but I think the article mentions it to the wrong character. I'll take a look at an episode to confirm it) --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 06:44, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

The last Squirrel Scout's name is Misty. Joanna no its not its michelle. georgina

Camper's Names

I know! Three Bean Scouts' names are: David (the muskrat), Kickpatrick (the cat) and Joey (the toucan). Joanna —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Yoko7890 (talk • contribs) 15:48, 30 December 2006 (UTC).

How do you know?67.175.138.202 05:16, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

Those names are untrue. Don't believe it. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 05:17, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

Number of Bean Scouts?

One epsiode of "Camp Lazlo" Slinkman reports to Lumpus that there are 14 Bean scouts. However there are 24 named Bean Scouts on article page. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 134.53.145.90 (talk) 01:57, 12 February 2007 (UTC).

Probably a writer's error. Black Kat 19:14, 20 February 2007 (UTC)

Images

Some of the images of the characters are sideways what is up with that.Bladez636

The person who got the pictures didn't do a well job. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 23:54, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

We don't need them

I'm curious, I don't think the extra links to the other characters (mostly the "other Squirrel Scouts"). They don't have much importance and the info doesn't provide enough info to have an article of their own. I don't think we need thos extra articles. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 23:54, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Maybe you're right. Those "other" Squirrel Scouts aren't as notable as those three who are more commonly seen and perhaps don't need main articles.

Tell you what. Sometimes I kinda like some of those other Squirrel Scouts. Sometimes I even imagined of episodes where they would have a lot of the limelight. I even think of the perceptions of mine to make on tube.

Removal of the clean-up tag? / Some concerns

This article was tagged a year ago because it was "chock-full of vandalism" and that it was "thrown together by a 2nd grader in 5 minutes" (The page in March 2006). I think it's been improved a lot since then (The page half a year later), but I have some concerns for this article: This article has gone through a lot of change since January 2007, but much of the change has ocurred in March, coincidentally a year after the article was tagged for cleanup. I'm not sure whether this major change is beneficial to the article or not (the change was not discussed on Talk:List of characters in Camp Lazlo), but I am sure that there are too many daughter articles because even some of the minor characters are starting to have them. Most of the articles are stubs and some of them feel fancrufty to me. Is there anything I could to do improve the article? That is what I was going to put on WP:RFF, but I realized that I needed to make a major edit onto this article. Another concern I have for the article is the names of the campers. Some users have been making unverifiable changes to the names (examples: [2]). The worst part of that is that many of the editors who do this don't provide where they get the names from in the edit summary (there are other uses for the edit summary, which include asking the question, "Why did you make this edit?"). Much of this article and some of its daughter articles are written in an in-universe style. The images don't have fair use rationales. The references have been removed. By the way, here's an updated peer review:

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Please share your suggestions on how to improve the article. Squirepants101 20:28, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, I can see some of the concerns. There are too many main articles being made, especially since there isn't much info about many of the characters. Before, the article was very lengthy, between having two articles for some of the characters, and that the list went forever. I only moved the ones that had main articles, mainly for the usual characters. The smaller ones, like the once in awhile characters, don't seem to need a main article. I would say the very minor characters should have their own area on this page, with just small info, or maybe not even have them at all. They're so minor, articles might not even be needed. Black Kat 14:11, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

Pics with other Squirrel Scouts

I found the pics with other Squirrel Scouts and send them to Wikipedia, but you've deleted these pics from the article List of characters in Camp Lazlo. Please, let them be in this article. yoko4567890

The pics can't be as big! yoko4567890

If you want your pictures to be approved, they can't be upside down. Also you have to upload pictures that look good, and don't take pictures directly from the TV with your camera. Try searching for images on Google. Besides, the pictures are not too big. On Wikipedia we basically use the thumb parametre, not e.g. 150px. The Prince of Darkness 10:46, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

Game of the Squirrels

What was that sport played by the Squirrel Scouts? It is mentioned in Love Sick and Lazlo Loves a Parade. I sort of know how its pronouced but I don't know how it's spelled.61.9.126.41 22:11, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

The poodle, the tapir and the gopher scouts

For some period in the article, the three from the Other Squirrel Scouts section have been named liked this. Suzie is the poodle, Terrifield is the tapir and Rachel is the gopher. Where do these names come from? I've seen just about all the episodes and these weren't addressed or mentioned. The name Suzie was mentioned in Dosey Doe but it was never directed to a particular character. Anyway, the names of these Squirrel Scouts have been confirmed;

Patsy-the mongoose
Nina-the giraffe
Gretchen-the alligator
Amber-the rabbit
Honey-the bear
Almondine-the owl
Toodie-the squirrel

When adding a name to the scouts, please include a scource so that they can be confirmed.61.9.126.41 08:14, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

Unnamed Squirrel Scouts

Because the names of these characters (the poodle, tapir and gopher) have never been revealed, they should perhaps remained as unnamed. Please don't assume or make up names. Things like that can be very misleading. If you think you know what the names of these characters are really, please include a scource or write was episode mentioned. That way, they can be accepted. Thank you. 61.9.126.41 03:40, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

Kirkpatrick

I just wanted to know who is kirkpatrick my friend and I have been arguing about who he is I for one think people are mistaking him for samson just with a lighter color if anyone has a true picture about his appearance please reply Youknowme(youdon'tknowme) 22:50, 2 July 2007 (UTC)

French phrase

Does anyone know what french phrase Clam said in Squirrel Seats, when asked by Raj "Why does Patsy want to sit by Lazlo anyway"?Noahcs 02:43, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

I can only pick out two words: "love" and "two" Yngvarr 00:43, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

Merging

I propose merging the artcle List of Bean Scouts and Squirrel Scouts from Camp Lazlo into this article because all informations of the former article are contained in this article.--Mujaki 17:46, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

I second the vote. edit: actually, I noticed you originally proposed wp:afd for the article in question, and would even go that route. The page was created in good faith, but it has no additional value beyond what already exists. Yngvarr 18:17, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

I'm making it a redirect for now, you can put it forward for AfD seeing as it was an orphan up until it was mentioned. --treelo _talk 10:48, 13 July 2007 (UTC)

Thank you for your support.

I'm sure that no one can find article name. But I had no good idea of the fitting name for both of "Bean Scouts" and "Squirrel Scouts" if it would be moved. i proposed deleting the article at first. However i could not explain the reason well.

BTY, I was going to merge (redirect) the page if there was no objection for a week. Didn't we need merge steps before redirect?--Mujaki 17:20, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

Minor scouts

Um, what happened to all of the minor scouts-"Wilbert" the beaver, Chuck/Ted the pig, etc. Fred/Harold and the Lemmings are on the characters page already, as well as recurring scouts-Dave and Ping-Pong, Chip and Skip, etc. But I still think that the minor scouts should be there, too.

Also, Squirrel Scouts need pictures.

The "minor" scouts really offer no notable role in the series. Their dialog is limited to a very few sentences, and their interaction with the rest of the characters such that it is probably better to class them as "props". At best, their descriptions contained phrase after phrase of "he appeared in the episode..."

If you feel they still need mention, it would be better to put them on the List of minor characters in Camp Lazlo, but I don't agree with that... Yngvarr 13:38, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

I've uploaded a couple of the Squirrel Scout pictures; I'll see if I can get more. So far the quality seems Ok, considering it's actually a camera shot of paused video! Yngvarr 17:28, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

I'm not sure who or when removed the table of contents; I personally the TOCRight, because the original table of contents was filling an entire screen and a half with TOC, just too much for the subject, so I put the TOC on the right, to flow with the text. Whoever did it, I actually like it without the individual campers, considering that quite a bit of their text descriptions was "she appeared in..." or "she sneezed in one episode". It can probably be moved, or just taken out, so the TOC is at the top like it should be. If you disagree, maybe the three major-majors (the three Jellies and the three Squirrels) could use their own sub. Yngvarr 17:34, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

I agree with Noahcs (or it should be changed to {{TOCleft|limit=2}}) because I feel the pages are legible in case of TOC on top/left. BTW, {{TOCright}} was added by The Prince of Darkness on May 8, 2007.--Mujaki 10:35, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

I added the |limit=2 section but I'd be alright with using {{TOCleft}} if it doesn't affect flow as it did before. --treelo _talk 12:28, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

Nina Neckerly

Nina can also be found in My Gym Partner's a Monkey, another show. However, her neck is much longer. Plus she wears a purple sweater and jeans instead of a Squirrel Scout uniform. One time, a horse tried to take over her life but she struck back after being harassed so much. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.4.116.112 (talk • contribs) 09:40, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

No, that's a completely different character, named Ingrid. Just because two cartoons have female giraffe characters, it doesn't mean they're meant to be the same. Lucky number 49 17:16, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

Wilbert?

I know there is a Bean Scout who is a beaver but I don't know about him being called Wilbert. Can someone tell what episode revealed his name? 210.4.116.112 08:43, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

Chances are it's a fabricated name which just creeped in to the article. Edit history should show a tendency for fabrication of names... There was one episode where Lumpis pins names on some of the unnamed scouts, but I don't recall the episode, or if he was named here. IMO, he shouldn't even be listed here, along with the non-notable appearences of the other crowd filler characters.

Chef McMuesli

Is Chef McMuesli's nickname "Wheatgrass Willie"?.User:Kongsaurus12.

Probably not, they never said it.

Actually, Lumpus calls McMuesli "Wheatgrass Willie" in the "Beans and Weenies" episode, but I don't think that's remarkable. Lumpus has a habit of making up adjectival names for people (Officer Donught), and would rather hear the name again before considering it reliable. Yngvarr 11:44, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

Chuck/Ted?

I changed the section name to Chuck/Ted a while ago, but someone apparently changed it back. So - should we mention that he was called Chuck in the pantsing episode (forgot what it was called) but Ted in the episode where Lumpus gives them name tags? Seritinajii 01:01, 7 August 2007 (UTC)Seri

POV

This article brings in heavy POV and unsourced observations. Not encyclopedic. -- Anonymous Dissident^Talk 16:38, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Examples? I read it through and want to see if that which you find dubious to be the same as what I figure could be seen as POV. --treelo _talk 19:10, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Most of the character traits have been sourced directly to their respective episodes. I echo the "examples" request. I know you're an admin, but please don't heavily slap articles with POV without citing particular examples and vague descriptions. Yngvarr 19:53, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

No, no. I'm not an admin. I just wanted to point out the problem. Tell you what - I will remove the POV tag (not the colloquial, that is a definite problem here), and then I find some examples for you. Cheers -- Anonymous Dissident^Talk 21:41, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

I won't dispute the colloquial tag; if you check the edit history, there are a few of us who have been trying to get this particular article to a higher quality. I'm not being belligerent, just still curious as to what would be considered POV, since we've basically tagged episode references to try to avoid just that issue. Yngvarr 22:00, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

QUOTE: "Lazlo is a fun-loving, free-wheeling Brazilian spider monkey. Lazlo is always happy and having fun, even when everyone else is bored; a creature of simple pleasures, Lazlo is easily entertained between creativity and a vivid imagination."

This is not encyclopedic. This has POV. It is OR. This is your opinion. You just need to present the confirmed facts, what is irrefutable about the character. -- Anonymous Dissident^Talk 23:22, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

~~Shall I tag the episode references for those particular statements? Yngvarr 23:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)~~

nvm, I did some rework which should (hopefully) be satisfactory. I'm sure it can use some more work Yngvarr 11:52, 16 August 2007 (UTC)

This is good. You have made references. Keep up the good work. Cheers -- Anonymous Dissident^Talk 16:24, 22 August 2007 (UTC)

Unknown Guy

A few minutes ago, I just watched Seven Deadly Sandwiches. I spotted some scout with glasses, and he looked furry and brown. He was sitting next to Mort (the pelican) and in front of him were Fred, Gordon, and Milt. Does anyone know who this is, or at least what? Seritinajii 15:00, 15 August 2007 (UTC)Seri

I have most of the episodes still on my DVR, I'll scan thru later and see. Check the section for Unnamed Scouts, the second one listed is a glasses-wearing scout. Would he match what you saw? Tho, to be honest, I wouldn't pay it much attention. If you remember the scene in "Hold It, Lazlo!" when Lazlo got in line to use the latrines, and there were at least 50 scouts in line ahead of him, even tho the camp doesn't have that many. Yngvarr 15:12, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

First person

The cleaning needed in this article is coming nicely, but another problem: perspective; not POV. Several times I saw this; an example that I cleaned up was "we see such and such doing this", which should be phrased "he is seen doing such and such". Let's see if we can make sure this is entirely encyclopedic. Otherwise - good work is going on around here. -- Anonymous Dissident^Talk 16:32, 22 August 2007 (UTC)

I've fixed up the few in this article that I could find; of course, the rest of the series will need to be audited, too; I'll go thru that later, unless someone gets there ahead of me.

I'd actually like to avoid the phrase "he is seen" (and variants), so I tried to work up alternate phrasing; for example, earlier edits contained sentence after sentence of "in the episode...", which really wrecked the flow of text, and I'd hate to see that same type of monotony applied again. Yngvarr 19:35, 22 August 2007 (UTC)