Talk:Live A Live/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Judgesurreal777 (talk · contribs) 02:59, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

GA Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

The whole article has been replaced, and any contributions I ever made are effectively replaced, so I’ll take this article! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 02:59, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

This is going to be simple;

I think the into should include a sentence on how people have asked for a remake, or how the creator would be open to it. There’s enough discussion in the article about it to warrant this I believe.

Added.

Add alt text for the images.

Added.

Are we allowed to use the fan names of the characters? I think we need official confirmation that that is allowed.

I used them and the chapter titles after checking on the JP wikipedia page, and finding that the names are practically identical. The fan translation here is very literally a translation, rather than a localization. And there isn't another clear source.

Finally, reception, is there any more? It’s relatively short compared to the rest of the article.

That's all there is.

And that should do it! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 03:05, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

I think I've addressed everything. --ProtoDrake (talk) 10:53, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Very nice, I will pass it. My FA advice is continue to look for more, especially reception, and great work once again!