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Another Wikicup nomination, so I believe it is appropriate for me to review this! --K. Peake 15:14, 16 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ha! I don't know why, but I anticipated that you might review this. Which is why I already made some changes to reflect on the issues on you brought up on the other GA review. Erick (talk)
Magiciandude Sick anticipation on your part, plus it is epic to see you made changes based off of my other review before I even opened the one for this article! --K. Peake 18:06, 16 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The song is a Christmas bolero-ballad which deals with selfless love and utilizes church bells." → "A Christmasboleroballad, the song utilizes church bells and lyrically deals with selfless love." with the targets and wikilink
Critical reception sentence should be the one directly after this; follow that with the commercial performance one
"Estefan performed the track live" → "Gloria Estefan performed the song live" since her husband was the most recently mentioned of the family
Ref 3's URL is not accessible in my country of the UK, plus the archive is just the main website; could you fix the archive, plus does it display the info if you can still access the source? Wikilink Sun-Sentinel here too.
Cite Grammy as publisher instead for ref 4 and target to Grammy Award
Cite Canciones Top 50 as publisher instead for ref 5
On hold after a quick review from me, but I already applauded your effort to take on my previous comments and hopefully you will put in effort to give a timely response here as well! --K. Peake 18:06, 16 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ay-yo! Thanks again for the review. I noticed that I tried to archive the Sun-Sentinel and the Baltimore Sun again with the Wayback Machine, they redirect to the main page. I have them archived under archive.today instead. It sucks they are blocked in your country, especially since I am personally against censorship and that includes region blocking. But I digress, they should work now. Let me know if there's anything else I may have missed. I've been notified that my glasses were shipped just yesterday. Erick (talk) 03:38, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Magiciandude That is great to hear that you are getting replacement glasses, but you still need to make the fixes I suggested around the bolero genre. --K. Peake 05:57, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Got it. I reused the other El Tiempo article of Gloria singing to Bill Clinton where it explicitly calls it a bolero ballad. Erick (talk) 21:37, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Magiciandude Nice one, I added a comma that was needed for grammar and remove excess use of the word "bolero". ✓Pass! --K. Peake 07:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]