Talk:MS Europic Ferry/GA1
GA Review[edit]
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:38, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
Taking this one. Review to follow after the Bot runs. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:38, 9 April 2021 (UTC) Look pretty good. Some comments:
- Link River Tyne, Ministry of Defence (United Kingdom), Southampton, Portsmouth, satellite navigation, pintle, Falkland Islands, aircraft carrier, Port Stanley, English Channel
- European Ferries is a duplicate link.
- Commas after Netherlands, England, Sierra Leone, Southampton, Northern Ireland, India (MOS:GEOCOMMA)
- Little bit confused here, probably because my geography of the UK is so bad. Was it built at the Neptune Yard at Walker-on-Tyne, or the Wallsend West Yard at Wallsend?
- Any idea of the size of the crew?
fitted with pintle-mounted Bren light machine guns as a rudimentary defence against low-level air attack
That would work well against a modern jet aircraft.
Europic Ferry was one of the first vessels to be identified by the Ministry of Defence as required for the campaign, it was earmarked for use as a stores transport ship in early April.
semi-colon instead of comma
After assembling to the east of the Falkland Islands the force sailed on 20 May
Comma after Falkland Islands
Entering the bay in the early morning of 22 May she spent much of the day anchored offshore
Comma after 22 May.
- Capitalise "Chinook"
- Suggest "HMS Hermes"
- Med Link Lines is red-linked but Howill Shipping is not?
She sailed for the United Kingdom on 23 June carrying returning troops of 2nd and 3rd Battalion, Parachute Regiment.
"Battalions"
Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:23, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Hawkeye7. Sorry I forgot to watchlist this, so I missed your review. I'm just waiting for a copy of Clegg (1969) which should arrive in the next week or so before I look at this one again. Many thanks - Dumelow (talk) 06:50, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Both images have appropriate licences
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Closing comment: I've filed the article under "transport" with other merchant ships rather than under "Warfare"
- Pass/Fail: