Talk:Marc Panepinto

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Edits to Page[edit]

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

Specific text to be added or removed: - CURRENT: On June 28, 2018, Panepinto pleaded guilty to federal corruption charges arising out of an attempted cover-up of unwanted sexual advances he made to a member of his Senate staff in January 2016.

- EDIT: Panepinto pleaded guilty to a misdemeanor public corruption charge in federal court. (violation of the Hatch Act) related to his time as a New York state senator in 2016. - CURRENT: Following Panepinto's announcement that he would not seek re-election, the Erie County District Attorney's Office opened an investigation into claims of an underage drinking party at Panepinto's home.[8] - EDIT: The investigation came up empty. - CURRENT: In December 2020, Panepinto's law license was suspended for one year.[11] - EDIT: He was reinstated to the practice of law in January 2022; he is currently a partner at Dolce Panepinto law firm.

Reason for the change: Factual inaccuracies
References supporting change: Source: https://www.wgrz.com/article/news/crime/former-state-senator-marc-panepinto-pleads-guilty-to-public-corruption/71-568564565#:~:text=BUFFALO%2C%20NY%2D%2D%20Former%20New,and%2For%20a%20%24100%2C000%20fine.

Source: https://finance.yahoo.com/video/da-investigating-senator-marc-panepinto-113347325.html?guccounter=1&guce_referrer=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuZ29vZ2xlLmNvbS8&guce_referrer_sig=AQAAAMCc0rL_zEU1dlbyd6ZoJ0Jq4iFW7U6ChK8GpTdpmY84eFAoV7QobkMR9NBtFdj0M-0r-GR_voRkE0v-p815jVQiEFndSCHLSW1peh3omBEwgOdlgVI7wtJpISDJ-VJxoDFsyiKa08I3uC5H4WgJyIa0yxerNOnMGwsKw1m7-k5A Source: https://law.justia.com/cases/new-york/appellate-division-fourth-department/2022/1168-ka-19-00992-1.html

2603:7080:1A00:2C4C:107F:3A2C:407:A93B (talk) 18:08, 27 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 27-JUL-2023[edit]

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Your edit request could not be reviewed because it is unclear which references are connected to which claim statements in the text of your proposal. When proposing edit requests it is important to highlight in the text, through the use of ref tags, which specific sources are doing the referencing for each claim. The point of these inline ref tags is to allow the reviewer and readers to check that the material is sourced; that point will be lost if the ref tags are not clearly placed. Note the examples below:

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The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.

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      1. Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1.
      2. Harinath, Paramjit. (2019) "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.
      3. Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2.

In the first example above there are three references provided, but the claim statements do not contain ref tags indicating which reference applies where. The ref tags instead have been placed outside of the text, bundled together towards the bottom. Your edit request similarly bundles the ref tags together outside of the area of the text. These links between material and their source references must be more clearly made, as shown in the next example below:

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The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,^[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.^[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.^[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1.

^ Harinath, Paramjit. (2019) "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.

^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2.

In the second example above, the links between the provided references and their claim statement ref tags are perfectly clear. Kindly formulate your edit request so that the claims made and their supporting references align in the text, and feel free to submit your proposal as a new edit request below this reply post at your earliest convenience. Regards, Spintendo 00:02, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

Specific text to be added or removed:

CURRENT: On June 28, 2018, Panepinto pleaded guilty to federal corruption charges arising out of an attempted cover-up of unwanted sexual advances he made to a member of his Senate staff in January 2016.

EDIT TO: Panepinto pleaded guilty to a misdemeanor public corruption charge in federal court. (violation of the Hatch Act) related to his time as a New York state senator in 2016. (Source: https://www.wgrz.com/article/news/crime/former-state-senator-marc-panepinto-pleads-guilty-to-public-corruption/71-568564565#:~:text=BUFFALO%2C%20NY%2D%2D%20Former%20New,and%2For%20a%20%24100%2C000%20fine.)

CURRENT: In December 2020, Panepinto's law license was suspended for one year.[11]

EDIT: He was reinstated to the practice of law in January 2022; he is currently a partner at Dolce Panepinto law firm.

SOURCE: https://law.justia.com/cases/new-york/appellate-division-fourth-department/2022/1168-ka-19-00992-1.html

Reason for the change: Factual inaccuracies and updates needed for clarification.

References supporting change: Listed above.

24.213.233.118 (talk) 14:35, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 8-AUG-2023[edit]

Edit request partially implemented

Y The information about the reinstatement of the subject's law license was implemented.
N The information concerning the subject's guilty plea was not changed, because adequate reasons for its change were not provided. The given reason, "Factual inaccuracies and updates needed for clarification" does not state with specificity what information in the existing claim is inaccurate. To substitute the existing language, please give the reasons why the current information needs to be changed.^[1]

Regards, Spintendo 14:58, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Currently it says he pled guilty to federal corruption charges when it was a misdemeanor public corruption charge and a violation of the Hatch Act. 24.213.233.118 (talk) 19:11, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 December 2019. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.

[noteFoot01a] Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1.

[noteFoot02a] Harinath, Paramjit. (2019) "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.

[noteFoot03a] Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2.

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