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SaTScan

A new topic, unrelated to the rest of the lively discussion on this talk page.

Martin Kulldorff's software SaTScan is very influential in the literature around and epidemiology. I created the page without knowing anything about the creator, and coming to his page I see that there is currently significant debate on current events/contributions.

Starting this topic because I think this page could focus a bit more on his academic contributions. Also, requesting help with the SaTScan page I have created if anyone wants to look over it. A section mentioning its use with COVID-19 might be useful. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 22:13, 11 February 2023 (UTC)

Is Kulldorff an epidemiologist?

The article's lede states that Kulldorff is a biostatistician, though does not mention that he is a epidemiologist. I think the specialty might be worthy to mention, as it seems a good amount of sources support his assertion in the field ( [1] [2] [3]). In a court-document under the New Civil Liberties Alliance, Kulldorff's background states under penalty of perjury: Dr. Martin Kulldorff is a Professor of Medicine at Harvard Medical School, and he is a biostatistician and epidemiologist at Brigham and Women’s Hospital ( [4] ). @Bon courage GuardianH (talk) 16:55, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

See previous discussion and dispute resolution on this. The only source which seems to consider it in depth explicitly says he is NOT an epidemiologist. So stick with what's certain. Bon courage (talk) 17:02, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

Do you know which discussion the source is mentioned in? I haven't been a part of the previous discussions, so finding one source among the tons of discussions about Kulldorff is like finding a needle in a haystack. GuardianH (talk) 17:09, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

See.[1] and this page's archives. Bon courage (talk) 17:16, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

Contentious BLP material?

Concerning this removal, I am not seeing any contentious BLP material in the passage removed. And concerning the removing editor's aspersions about the source, WP:RSP has Science-Based medicine green-listed. Therefore I see no grounds for removal. Newimpartial (talk) 19:20, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

I agree with Newimpartial. I don't see a valid reason for removal and I think a case needs to be made here before it's removed again. — Czello ^(music) 21:26, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

Neutrality and tone on disputed section "Views on COVID-19"

Section has been previously disputed and I believe current wording is not ideal. I rephrased it to say the same thing with "nonjudgmental language" per Wikipedia:Neutral point of view and Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons. This topic is clearly disputed between researchers, and factually the rephrasing I did is accurate, more neutral, and less judgmental.

The sentence in question is uncited and uses the words "error-laden," "falsely claimed", and "illogically argued." I added the citation to the sentence in question to clearly show where it was from. My rephrasing states objectively that he published an essay with claims, and then moves the criticism to the following sentence, and clearly states that it is the words from the source publication Science-Based Medicine. This reorganization is a statement of fact, that Kulldorff published an essay, followed by the opinion on that essay, which clearly shifts the tone from looking like the opinion of Wikipedia, to stating the facts around the controversial publication. As this is a contentious topic, and the citation is single opinion piece on a living person, it is important to be as neutral as possible to avoid being perceived as bias.

As the change I made maintains the same exact meaning as the previous section while adding context and eliminating what could be seen as editorializing, I struggle to see the resistance. Previous discussions have shown that the SBM article is contentious, and many users have brought up criticisms of this sentence, source, and entire paragraph. I believe the amount of dispute on it warrants at least considering that it does not appear neutral, and that the rewording I proposed is both accurate and more neutral to respect the amount of dispute that has clearly happened.

Original text

In December 2021 Kulldorff published an error-laden essay for the Brownstone Institute in which he falsely claimed that influenza was more hazardous to children than COVID-19, and on that basis illogically argued against children receiving COVID-19 vaccination. In reality, influenza had been responsible for one child death in the 2020/21 season, while public health mitigation of COVID-19 was in place – COVID-19 had, in contrast, killed more than 1,000.

Proposed revision

In December 2021 Kulldorff published an essay for the Brownstone Institute in which he claimed that influenza was more hazardous to children than COVID-19, and on that basis argued against children receiving COVID-19 vaccination. This essay was criticized by the website Science-Based Medicine for containing errors and factual inaccuracies, with influenza responsible for one child death in the 2020/21 season, while public health mitigation of COVID-19 was in place – COVID-19 had, in contrast, killed more than 1,000. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 20:45, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

References

Yuck, the proposed re-write is POV as it implies the error is just an opinion. This has already been discussed to death. Wikipedia needs to be clear about WP:FRINGESUBJECTS and WP:YESPOV applies.

@Bon courage, the proposed rewrite does not imply that anything is just an opinion, it literally says "This essay was criticized by the website Science-Based Medicine for containing errors and factual inaccuracies, with influenza responsible for one child death in the 2020/21 season, while public health mitigation of COVID-19 was in place – COVID-19 had, in contrast, killed more than 1,000." This does not say that the website was posting an opinion, but states that the website criticized it for factual inaccuracies. It has been "discussed to death" because the tone of this line does not read as neutral or disengaged. The number of people who have brought this up and complete unwillingness to compromise at all on the wording is ridiculous. This is a biography of a living person, "Criticism and praise should be included if they can be sourced to reliable secondary sources, so long as the material is presented responsibly, conservatively, and in a disinterested tone." This is far from a disinterested tone. Also, remember to sign your comments please. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 03:14, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

Actually it was discussed to death principally because a disruptive editor wouldn't stop trying to change it. They've since been blocked. By personifying a website as criticising something for something, you make it seem like it's just the view of "the website". If misinformation is being aired (as it was about the supposed harmlessness of COVID) Wikipedia needs to make that context crystal clear. If (as you acknowledge) WP:SBM is a reliable source (i.e. for assertions of fact), why attribute it? This creates a POV problem per WP:YESPOV by making facts seem like opinions. You could just say "The essay contained errors and factual inaccuracies ..." to be neutral, no? Bon courage (talk) 03:41, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

The disruptive editors in my opinion after reading the discussion were the ones refusing to change it, but that is besides the point. This wording doesn't look disinterested, and I think that it needs to be heavily reworded while maintaining the spirit of the text. I think this can help to avoid future heated discussions and reflect that there has been a lot of dispute here.

The wording on the second sentence I proposed can be improved to avoid "personifying" the website, you're right. Would something like "A publication in Science-Based Medicine criticized Kulldorff's essay for containing errors and factual inaccuracies, pointing out that influenza was responsible for one child death in the 2020/21 season, while public health mitigation of COVID-19 was in place – COVID-19 had, in contrast, killed more than 1,000."

Because this is controversial, I would prefer to put the full responsibility for stating this is factually inaccurate onto the source to avoid the perception that it is Wikipedia editors taking a stance on this, which is what the current sentence looks like. Clearly stating Science-Based Medicine in the second stance is also consistent with stating the essay was published for the Brownstone Institute. This is an approach I take in my professional research as well, I make sure to document exactly where my data and arguments are coming from to shift the discussion away from a debate about my opinion to what the sources say. My format is something like:

Source 1 said (a thing). Source 2 (agree/disagree), reasoning. Source 3 (agree/disagree), reasoning. etc."

For example, something like "Somebody published an essay that the world is flat and that we should not sail to close to the edge to avoid falling off.(citation1) All of science disagrees because science.(citation2)"

Saying "Somebody published an error-laden essay that falsely claimed the Earth is flat, and illogically argued we should not sail to close to the edge to avoid falling off" does not appear as neutral or disinterested.

I believe it is clear that the text here needs a tone revision, as it clearly reads in a way that strikes some editors the wrong way. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 04:43, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

The principle problem with your proposal is that it is POV. For this encyclopedia we are required to state facts in wikivoice to be neutral, per WP:YESPOV, and NPOV is not negotiable. You say "because this is controversial" we need to do otherwise, but it's not "controversial" that Kuldorff was simply wrong (unless you can produce RS to that effect). Ancillary problems with the proposal are the personification of the "website" (if it were to be attributed, it would be to J Howard), the unfortunate shift to the passive voice, and the slightly shonky "criticised for ..." / " ... with ..." / " ... while ..." syntax. In short, what we have is fine. Bon courage (talk) 04:56, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

We have sources saying he is factually wrong, and that needs to be clearly and unambiguously reflected in a disinterested and neutral tone. The Howard article, while from a reliable source, has a bit of a hostile tone (reflected in Howards other publications discussing Kuldorff). While this tone may or may not be warranted, it should be toned down in a biography of a living person. Another suggested revision to sentence 2:

"Jonathon Howard published a response to Kulldorff's essay in Science-Based Medicine, pointing out Kulldorff's essay contained errors and factual inaccuracies, specifically noting that influenza was responsible for one child death in the 2020/21 season, while public health mitigation of COVID-19 were in place – COVID-19 had, in contrast, killed more than 1,000."

This links Jonathon Howards page to the opinion directly, as well as the publication. Science arguments are scary and get really heated. They usually don't enter the realm of pop-science and general news coverage though. This approach, the objective dry statement of fact that Kulldorff published something, followed by a sentence that details a sources response to it, using as neutral and disinterested of a tone as possible, would maintain the content of the paragraph while making it appear less inflammatory to a reader. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 05:27, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

This is not a "science argument", it's a case where we must simply state the well-sourced factual reality (not "opinion"). Your new proposal does not avoid the WP:YESPOV problem, introduces new MOS:SAY problems ("noted", "pointed out") and links the wrong Howard. There is no need to dance around; just relay the knowledge and move on. Bon courage (talk) 06:30, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

You're right, this is not a "science" argument. It is a case of stating what we must factually, in a neutral, disinterested, conservative tone. The current entry does not sound encyclopedic, it sounds like an opinion piece in a news article. The first statement is just "they said a thing," and then we follow that with what sources say about that thing they said. We don't say "they falsely said a thing and illogically thought something based on their error-laden statement." Others may in the future disagree that the claim is "false," "illogical," or "error-ridden," but that doesn't change that they said it, or what a source claimed about it. If in the future another source comes up, it is as easy as adding another sentence. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 17:33, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

Attributing the facts makes the paragraph sound like debating expert opinions, which must be avoided. That isn't a neutral tone, that is giving equal validity to a fringe position. When a fringe claim is false, Wikipedia should say so - not try to avoid taking a stand. MrOllie (talk) 13:05, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

Taking a stand is not a neutral point of view, and this text on biographies of a living person is using non-encyclopedic tone and looks like an attack page. I am not the first one to say this, but any attempts to resolve this have been blocked by the same few editors. As I said earlier, saying "Somebody published an error-laden essay that falsely claimed the Earth is flat, and illogically argued we should not sail to close to the edge to avoid falling off" does not appear as neutral or disinterested. The same is true here. Attributing the fact, that Kulldorff published an essay, followed by an expert rebuttal of that essay, is not giving "equal validity" to a fringe position, it is just reflecting reality. The current text does not just look like Wikipedia is taking a stand, it looks like a poorly written attack page at first glance, which is why so many people have already taken issue with the wording here. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 15:31, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

I just don't understand this line of argument. This is not a matter where one can legitimately "take a stand" unless it's allowed that maybe Kulldorff was right (WP:PROFRINGE). We just say what is the case. If it's a fact that Kulldorff was wrong, then per WP:YESPOV simply say so. Why can we ignore WP:YESPOV? Bon courage (talk) 15:36, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

In the case that someone claimed the Earth is flat, we would indeed say they 'falsely' claimed that. It would not be a violation of neutrality to do so. What we absolutely would not do is follow the sentence with something like 'NASA has criticized the essay because the Earth is round'. We don't present mainstream science as another opinion. MrOllie (talk) 15:52, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

While the flat Earth sentence might be extreme, the language used here is still inappropriate as it is not encyclopedic. The topic of this page isn't the content the subject has written about, but the living person. "<Subject of article> published a controversial article claiming Earth is flat in a flat Earth Newsletter. Somebody at NASA pointed out that the article contained errors and factual inaccuracies, specifically that it ignored thousands of years of science and had no evidence" is a perfectly accurate statement. Even the source used in this particular case starts with the sentence "Dr. Martin Kulldorff, one of the authors of the Great Barrington Declaration (GBD), recently penned an article for his new employer, the right-wing think tank the Brownstone Institute titled “Vaccines Save Lives“." By using overly harsh language, especially in a sentence that appears to be in Wikipedia's voice, you do more damage then you prevent by making conspiracy theorists think you are not approaching it neutrally. What I'm proposing is a more "cautious," "dispassionate," "conservative," and "disinterested" approach to the topic.

From Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons:

Tone

"BLPs should be written responsibly, cautiously, and in a dispassionate tone, avoiding both understatement and overstatement. Articles should document in a non-partisan manner what reliable secondary sources have published about the subjects, and in some circumstances what the subjects have published about themselves. Summarize how actions and achievements are characterized by reliable sources without giving undue weight to recent events. Do not label people with contentious labels, loaded language, or terms that lack precision, unless a person is commonly described that way in reliable sources. Instead use clear, direct language and let facts alone do the talking."

Balance

"Criticism and praise should be included if they can be sourced to reliable secondary sources, so long as the material is presented responsibly, conservatively, and in a disinterested tone. Do not give disproportionate space to particular viewpoints; the views of small minorities should not be included at all. Care must be taken with article structure to ensure the overall presentation and section headings are broadly neutral. Beware of claims that rely on guilt by association, and biased, malicious or overly promotional content."

Again, this exact sentence has come up repeatedly by editors as sounding problematic, and despite this, the same few editors have refused to even prepose an alternative wording that could satisfy all parties while maintaining the objective content, instead declaring consensus and stonewalling for the status quo. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 16:53, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

You could always post to WP:FTN if you want (even) more eyes on the question of how to handle WP:FRINGE claims. Bon courage (talk) 16:58, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

I posted it to Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard#Additional eyes needed on contentious article Martin Kulldorff a few days ago but haven't received interest yet. In this case, the fact Kulldorff published something is not in itself "fringe," it's the content of the source. This is a biography of a living person, and a contentious article, so must be held to very strict content policy.

The Wikipedia:Fringe theories#Treatment of living persons page stated:

"Close attention should be paid to the treatment of those who hold fringe viewpoints, since as a rule they are the focus of controversy. All articles concerning these people must also comply with Wikipedia's policy on biographies of living persons (WP:BLP). Fringe views of those better known for other achievements or incidents should not be given undue prominence, especially when these views are incidental to their fame. However, the WP:BLP policy does not provide an excuse to remove all criticism from a biography or to obscure the nature of a person's fringe advocacy outside of their field of expertise (see WP:PROFRINGE, WP:PSCI, WP:BLP § Balance)."

I'm arguing that this sentence violates WP:BLP tone, as have others, so I thought that would get priority. I'll post this discussion there as well though. I should note that based on WP:BLP guidelines:

"When material about living persons has been deleted on good-faith BLP objections, any editor wishing to add, restore, or undelete it must ensure it complies with Wikipedia's content policies. If it is to be restored without significant change, consensus must be obtained first. Material that has been repaired to address concerns should be judged on a case-by-case basis."

Good faith objections have been raised, by myself and others. It has been restored, repeatedly both here and in previous discussions, without significant change to the status quo ante bellum before consensus was obtained first. The fact this has come up so much to me indicates that it is not just me who finds the tone less then adequate, and that compromise can likely be reached to improve how this content is written. For example, we can maintain the content of this while also not presenting three separate descriptions of the work as "error-laden," "falsely claimed," or "illogically argued." Especially when it is only one source cited to back those assertions, and the sentence in question is not clearly citing that source.

(To get ahead of any COI finger pointing, I don't agree with Martin Kulldorff on this, and I have never met him. I didn't even know about him before starting the article for SaTScan. From my personal experience, being highly critical of this kind of content only reinforces conspiratorial thinking, which is largely why I want to avoid using language that can and has been perceived as less then neutral in tone.) GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 18:31, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

The matter is not biographical, but applies to a factual claim made in the realm of biomedicine. Scientific claims do not "inherit" the BLP protection accorded to the person who uttered them, and to claim otherwise if WP:CRYBLP. We have a reliable source countering a fringe view; we say what it says. Job done. Bon courage (talk) 18:45, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

This page is biographical, and to say otherwise is ridiculous. The first line of the source states: "Dr. Martin Kulldorff, one of the authors of the Great Barrington Declaration (GBD), recently penned an article for his new employer, the right-wing think tank the Brownstone Institute titled “Vaccines Save Lives." It then discusses the content of the publication. This is exactly the format I'm suggesting, following the reliable source used here: Statement of fact that an article exists in one sentence, followed by another on the factual accuracy and content. This has come up repeatedly by multiple editors, and could be reworded in respect of the good faith criticisms of tone and apparent neutrality while maintaining the same exact content. I honestly don't understand the strong resistance to what could be an easy compromise and insistence on the status quo ante bellum despite this being brought up multiple times. The resistance to change and lack of any compromised revision to the text really feels like Wikipedia:Status quo stonewalling. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 18:57, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

That's just a personal attack. You've been given precise policy based rationales wrt WP:NPOV which you have completely failed to engage with, instead flailing around with poorly-worded and outright incorrect proposals. Time to ignore. Bon courage (talk) 19:20, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

It is not a personal attack, it is an observed pattern of behavior after reading this talk page and seeing what appears to be a refusal to compromise on tone/wording of a single sentence after multiple editors have expressed concern. I have attempted to engage with your arguments, you did not like my response. You have failed to even offer a compromise alternative text of your own that addresses concerns. You have been given precise policy based rationales that you have completely failed to engage with. Looking at this talk page, it looks increasingly like a textbook example of Wikipedia:POV railroad, complete with threats to ban users (pointing to other users who have been "blocked indefinitely" for disagreeing with this), and bait like this replies "time to ignore" line. This behavior "gives Wikipedia an undesirable reputation as a place where aggression and gaming the system are permitted, valued and rewarded." GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 03:03, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

No. Ridiculous is the GBD. The above reasoning sounds WP:CPP to whitewash the dangerous flawed and rejected claims promoted by right-wing think-tanks and their footmen. Ixocactus (talk) 20:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

Okay, lets change things up. I don't agree with Kulldorff at all personally, but in good faith thought this legitimately violated tone and neutrality policy. In the case that we are trying to avoid whitewashing stuff, the current text is not clear enough, and definitly not in line with the citations tone. How about the following:

"In December 2021, the contrarian Kulldorff, anchored to his ideas put forward in the GBD, decided to "spread disinformation" with ridiculous, error-ridden, "anti-vaccine hogwash," for the right wing think-tank Brownstone Institute, in which he tried "to trick their readers with word games" by falsely putting forth "absurd comparisons" and a "blatant lie" that influenza was more hazardous to children than COVID-19. On that basis, he illogically argued using "rhetorical sleight of hand tricks", that children should not receive COVID-19 vaccinations. Upon reviewing this text, one publications said "No semi-rational author could include all the relevant facts and still conclude that it’s a bad idea to vaccinate children" and speculated that Kulldorff knows this but believes it would undermine the GBD. In summary this publication stated "How sad.""

I honestly don't like Kulldorffs stance, but as a researcher and teacher would have marked an undergraduate paper off for this kind of unscholarly wording. If Wikipedia is really a place where we want to avoid whitewashing stuff, then the current text is no where near extreme enough. Above I have added some highlight quotes from the reliable source cited in the article to drive the point home. Either the current texts tone is too strong, or not strong enough, but it must be changed. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 02:40, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

See Fallacy of the excluded middle and WP:POINT. Bon courage (talk) 02:49, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Do not disrupt Wikipedia to illustrate a point:

"A commonly used shortcut to this page is WP:POINT. However, just because someone is making a point does not mean that they are disrupting Wikipedia to illustrate that point. As a rule, editors engaging in "POINTy" behavior are making edits with which they do not actually agree, for the deliberate purpose of drawing attention and provoking opposition in the hopes of making other editors see their "point". Merely describing such hypothetical behavior is fine and does not go against this guideline. For example, saying By that standard, we ought to remove all the cited sources on this page is okay, but actually doing that just to make a point is not."

I did not disrupt Wikipeida. This is the talk page, and I was making a point and saying "By that standard" we ought to really drive the point home and avoid whitewashing this. Please refrain from Wikilawyering when you're supposed to be ignoring me. False accusations are the lamest form of wikibullying, and technically constitute a personal attack. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 03:13, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

It is not appropriate to include quotations from any source in such a way that they are given the weight of wikivoice. I believe this should be obvious to all editors, so I conclude that Geog is making a straw goat argument here.

And re: the prior statement, This page is biographical - yes, but that does not mean that all content in the article is sensitive WP:BLP content. That Lund is in Sweden is not BLP content, and that Covid-19 was more dangerous to children than the flu is also not BLP content. Newimpartial (talk) 03:43, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

Indeed. There was even once an RfC[2] to test the idea that BLP extended to person's (fringe) views. TL;DR – it doesn't. Bon courage (talk) 03:50, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

I was making a point. The tone of the text in Wikivoice is not neutral or disinterested. This is why it has come up repeatedly on this talk page. While I agree it is important to avoid whitewashing misinformation, my concern is that by using to many loaded words in a sentence without a citation we don't appear neutral or disinterested. Even if my proposed text is not what we go with, I request some sort of rewording on that sentence.

For example: "Kulldorff published an essay titled "Vaccines save lives" for the Brownstone Institute, a right-wing think tank, that has been criticized for factual inaccuracies. Jonathan Howard published a critical response to this in Science-Based Medicine, detailing errors and factual inaccuracies, such as pointing out that while influenza was responsible for one child death in the 2020/21 season while public health mitigation of COVID-19 was in place – COVID-19 had, in contrast, killed more than 1,000."

The overall content is great, no complaint. Our delivery does not read as encyclopedic and that is why this keeps coming up by editors. If you change the topic to something less controversial, would this sentence be in a tone that is acceptable in Wikivoice? Cause it really doesn't sound like it to me.

I'm looking for some level of back and forth compromise to make a better entry, there is always room for improvement in text. Multiple editors have over time expressed various levels of dissatisfaction with this wording. Currently it feels like there is stubborn resistance to any change for reasons that I'm struggling to understand (as a professional in GIS and public health research that is highly against disinformation and not in agreement with Kulldorff on this). Personally I think the current wording does more harm then good by making it look like Wikipedia is not neutral on this, which only reinforces conspiracy theorists. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 04:14, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

"Tone" and "neutrality" are the go-to vocabulary of users who want to portray Kulldorff's views as having more merit than they actually do. If you want to address style questions, you should avoid those words in fringe article talk pages because if you use them, you paint yourself as a fringe POV pusher. You could argue that "error-laden", "falsely" and "illogically" are too much and bad style, without adding the dogwhistle words. Well, arguing against vaccination against one disease because another disease is more dangerous is indeed illogical in itself, and if the other disease is actually far less dangerous, that makes the total quality of his reasoning abysmally bad. It is creationist-level reality denial. At least two of the negative qualifiers are needed.

Attributing statements to SBM instead of putting it in Wikivoice would be acceptable if there were serious people who contradict the influenza and COVID death numbers. --Hob Gadling (talk) 05:27, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

Thank you. I don't know how much you read of the text wall, but I'm not a supporter of his views (I use some software he wrote in my research, when I wrote the Wikipedia page for it and came to his article to tag it was actually the first I learned of the controversy.) I apologize if I used incorrect language to describe the issue, I thought I was referencing specific Wikipedia policy, didn't mean to dog whistle.

The qualifiers can be moved to a second sentence and attributed clearly to the source while still allowing for a neutral statement that the publication exists. We could even move the description of the content within the essay to a separate, cited, sentence with qualifiers. We could even avoid repeating the misleading material entirely. For example:

"In December 2021 Kulldorff published an essay for the Brownstone Institute, a right-wing think tank, titled "Vaccines save lives." Jonathan Howard published a critical response to this in Science-Based Medicine, noting that despite it sounding like an article he might agree with based on the title, the essay is not in line with medical consensus. Howard detailed factual errors, omissions, and logical flaws in this article, stating that this essay "mostly argued against vaccinating children.""

Not a perfect block of text, but it is better "style" in my opinion, and avoids repeating any of the specific misinformation while giving the reader context. Working on bigfoot I noticed that strong language will either be preaching to the choir, or give the conspiracy theorists ammunition (I fought to keep the words "dubious evidence" in a sentence, but listed multiple sources to do so). Working to make the block appear as objective as possible while presenting the counter arguments in a clear, disinterested tone might do more to lower the temperature around fringe topics then strong qualifiers.

If you have any proposed re-wordings based on anything I've written, or your own ideas, I'd love to see them. Based on this talk page, I think it is clear I'm not the only person who doesn't like the style of this text. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 06:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

GeogSage, unless you believe the whole section's tone is non-neutral, and not just the two sentences, then perhaps you could switch the section neutrality template you added to to an in-text tag? Llll5032 (talk) 07:09, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

It seems, Geog, that you may be unfamiliar with the distinction used on enwiki between neutrality and false neutrality. Neutrality in language is required when multiple perspectives carry similar epistemological status (some critics laud an artist's work and others are withering, in a classic example).

False neutrality occurs when an article presents a fact as an opinion: "X stated in his article that cryptids are real; this was disputed in another article by Y". The latter doesn't really respect what the facts are (in "our" speech community and episteme, it is "a fact" that cryptids do not exist).

The language you have been proposing for the paragraph in question seems to others to represent false balance, since it presents the essay Kuldorff wrote for Brownstone as though it was equally grounded in fact as the statements made criticizing it. This appearance violates what "our" episteme holds to be true, and therefore violates enwiki policy. Newimpartial (talk) 11:08, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

Changed the tag to an inline tag for "tone." The issue is style and wording more then anything, this is not encyclopedic or scholarly. Ideally, the source used here would be a bit less "passionate" about the topic, or that we had one or two more backing it up, but it is a factually accurate reliable source so not going to argue that.

On crptids, the best example I've seen for them is Bigfoot#Documented_hoaxes. One passage from the bigfoot page:

"The most well-known video of an alleged Bigfoot, the Patterson-Gimlin film, was recorded on October 20, 1967, by Roger Patterson and Robert "Bob" Gimlin in an area called Bluff Creek in Northern California. The 59.5-second-long video has become an iconic piece of Bigfoot lore, and continues to be a highly scrutinized, analyzed, and debated subject. Academic experts from related fields have typically judged the film as providing no supportive data of any scientific value, with perhaps the most common proposed explanation being that it was a hoax."

Basically formatted:

"X published an article that cryptids are real. Y reviewed the evidence presented, and stated it was factually inaccurate, pointing out omissions, fallacies, and logical flaws. This is in line with the scientific consensus that cryptids are not real."

The source that we are basing this paragraph on opens with the line "Dr. Martin Kulldorff, one of the authors of the Great Barrington Declaration (GBD), recently penned an article for his new employer, the right-wing think tank the Brownstone Institute titled “Vaccines Save Lives“." This is a statement of fact, the article existed. It then goes on to detail issues with the article. We do not need to say that the article is error-laden, illogical, or containing omissions because we are just reporting what sources say. I don't know how the second two lines I preposed in the last text block ("Jonathan Howard published a critical response to this in Science-Based Medicine, noting that despite it sounding like an article he might agree with based on the title, the essay is not in line with medical consensus. Howard detailed factual errors, omissions, and logical flaws in this article, stating that this essay "mostly argued against vaccinating children.") make anything about Kulldorff's article look grounded in fact. The rest of the section is more or less what I'm describing here. For example:

"His efforts resulted in the Great Barrington Declaration, an open letter co-authored with Oxford’s Sunetra Gupta and Stanford’s Jay Bhattacharya for the AIER. The document stated that lower-risk groups would develop herd immunity through infection while vulnerable groups should be protected from the virus. The World Health Organization, the National Institutes of Health and other public-health bodies said such a policy lacked a sound scientific basis."

Rewording this along the same logic as the text I'm disputing would result in something like:

"His efforts resulted in the error-laden Great Barrington Declaration, an open letter co-authored with Oxford’s Sunetra Gupta and Stanford’s Jay Bhattacharya for the AIER, a conservative libertarian think tank known for spreading climate and health misinformation. The document illogically argued that lower-risk groups would develop herd immunity through infection while vulnerable groups should be protected from the virus based on false information and ommissions. The World Health Organization, the National Institutes of Health and other public-health bodies said such a policy lacked a sound scientific basis."

I think the first text is better and less likely to cause accusations of bias. The tone is more scholarly, while maintaining an accurate, grounded, disinterested reflection of what the sources say. GeogSage ^{(⚔Chat?⚔)} 17:06, 29 March 2024 (UTC)