Talk:Mary Louise Prather

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cooper kat2018.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:40, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

Kat, You did a really nice job with your draft. I think you did well with dividing up the sections and providing sufficient and quality information in each section. I listed a few things you may want to change, but overall, it was really well done.

• In your lead maybe explain what "SIS" is or link it to an existing article. But other than that I think your lead was easy to understand.
• Under the "Work" section, the second sentence needs a little rewording. Maybe something like "Prather's first jobs included working on the office machines such as the sorter, reproducer, tabulator, and key punch."
• Add in your citations. Keep in mind to use balanced coverage of your sources when you add them in.
• For the Awards and Recognitions section I felt like the sentence could either be divided up a little more or you should condense it. Right now it feels a little bit like a run-on. Madisonekern (talk) 19:37, 27 November 2017 (UTC)