Talk:Mayfield Salisbury Church

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Proposed edits November 2022[edit]

This article clearly needs some work. Over the next few days I propose to do the following:

- Expand the History section, with a focus on the church itself (the building and the congregation) rather than the district.

- Remove the peacock language (example: "it has been blessed with a distinguished line of much loved and erudite preachers as minister").

- Add a new section on the church's architecture.

- Add suitable citations throughout.

- Possibly remove the Festivals section as this is well out of date and not supported by citations.

Feedback on the above changes would be welcome. Thanks. Mike Marchmont (talk) 09:32, 14 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Update: I have now completed all of the above edits. If anyone disagrees with any of them, feel free to start a discussion.Mike Marchmont (talk) 12:09, 15 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]