Talk:Melanocyte-inhibiting factor

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No points for comprehensibility[edit]

This is a really dreadful article from the point of view of a reader trying to find out more about the subject. It is wildly over-referenced, and almost completely incomprehensible. What an author is supposed to do is read the references himself, and then tell the rest of us the salient points about the subject. Key references can then support the author's interpretation. Remember, these articles are meant for people who are not specialists in the particular subject treated in the article. Macdonald-ross (talk) 12:05, 5 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]