Talk:Milton Grafman

Tone

The article as it currently reads is basically a prolonged defense of Grafman, and not really encyclopedic. It would greatly benefited from some rigorous editing. I am not in a position to the kind of job that it deserves, but if I have time I will take a first stab at it. I hope that editors better versed in both the subject and wiki guidelines will follow up.--Gogh (talk) 01:37, 16 January 2012 (UTC)

I have now taken a stab at modifying the Civil Rights section, adding references (internal and external), editing for length, and attempting to find a more balanced and NPOV tone.--Gogh (talk) 08:52, 16 January 2012 (UTC)

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