Talk:Mini Metro (video game)/GA1
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 02:18, 11 August 2016 (UTC) Hello, I, Tintor2 will review this article. It looks to be in good shape, so I'll probably pass it after seeing issues solved. Here we go:
- Can the lead be expanded to be split in at least two paragraphs per WP:Lead? The article is pretty so I think it would be easy.
- I've expanded this.
- Gameplay section: What does "In the Normal play mode"? Is it a diffculty?
- It's the name of a game mode. I've added quote marks to emphasise that. The text explains how "Normal" differs from the "Endless" game mode. Tell me if it still isn't clear.
- Reception: The vg reviews template could be expanded with the ones you used in the prose like "| rev1 = | rev1Score = "
- The other reviews didn't give scores.
- The excellence in audio could also be added with "| award1Pub = | award1 = "
- I don't like to use the award entry in the VG reviews template because the text looks too small and cramped. So I prefer to just summarise in prose if there aren't that many awards. That's just my personal preference.
- Lastly, just an advice. If the development section is too large, I would recommend it to have a subsection.
- Usually I would split the development section into subsections, but for this article it seemed better to write it in a chronological order due to the way the game was released. So there isn't really clearly defined subsections for it.
That's all I could gather. Looks like a solid GA. Also if you have some free time could you take a look at my latest peer review? Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 02:18, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Tintor2: I've addressed your comments above. Anything else need to be changed? --The1337gamer (talk) 21:32, 12 August 2016 (UTC)