Talk:Monster Kingdom: Jewel Summoner

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Okay, let's see...

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   I think it's reasonably good quality. Two things, though: get rid of the redlinks; and in the reception section, you might want to break off the first sentence into a new paragraph and put the aggregate scores in that paragraph.

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   Good job with that. Many video game articles I see don't have any references in the gameplay and plot sections.

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   The images shouldn't be as large as they are, but otherwise, I think it's okay.

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Fix the few issues I said, but nice work! A well-written and informative article.

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