Talk:Monte Pearson/GA1
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 08:52, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Hi,I will be reviewing this article.
In the lead,
I will be doing the rest tomorrow.RRD13 (talk) 08:52, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
- That's baseball terminology. Under WP:GACN, the reviewer should not impose their "own stylistic preferences or national variety of English on the article text." Just because I'm not using football terminology, doesn't mean it's incorrect. I used both these wordings in Neal Ball and George Nicol (baseball), and both were passed by the reviewers. Heck, even Mariano Rivera, one of the best baseball FA, utilizes the term "organization." —Bloom6132 (talk) 14:13, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Early Life
- Maybe sprinkle some information about his parents.
- "He later moved to Fresno, California" is mentioned but where he lived before is not mentioned
RRD13 (talk) 08:35, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
Professional career
- Since Cleveland Indians paragraph contains information about his demotion to minor leagues, the heading can be renamed.RRD13 (talk) 05:17, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
- That's not necessary. As per Derek Jeter and Mariano Rivera FAs, the "Minor leagues" section is to describe his time in the minors before he gets promoted to the major leagues for the first time. After that, there's no need to mention any demotions back to the minors in the title. —Bloom6132 (talk) 18:30, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
- That's not necessary. As per Derek Jeter and Mariano Rivera FAs, the "Minor leagues" section is to describe his time in the minors before he gets promoted to the major leagues for the first time. After that, there's no need to mention any demotions back to the minors in the title. —Bloom6132 (talk) 18:30, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
New York Yankees
- The ref 1 footnote in the sentence immediately following the one above cites both the contract and his stats.
Cincinnati Reds
Personal Life
RRD13 (talk) 06:37, 24 October 2013 (UTC)
Now its perfect for GA status RRD13 (talk) 17:33, 24 October 2013 (UTC)