Talk:NASA Astronaut Group 3/GA1
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Reviewer: Kees08 (talk · contribs) 05:26, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
- No training photo?
- Replace Anders image with higher resolution
- Same for Bean
- Same for Freeman
- Personality rights warning for portraits
- Can you add a description, date, etc to File:RichardFGordon.jpg? I'm sure that is more than a GA requires, but while we are here..
- Maybe add an image to the background section per my same comment at the group 2 article
That's it for images for now Kees08 (Talk) 02:11, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
- Can we avoid repeating 'the selection panel'? by the selection panel. The selection panel
Re-worded. Hawkeye7 (discuss)- Could change to depicted asked what it was a picture of.
- Change inches to feet and inches, and don't metric users measure height by meters? 70.1 inches (1,780 mm), compared with 69.79 inches (1,773 mm)
- Metric users quote their heights in centimetres (I'm 178 cm). Adjusted the conversion. The original source is in inches rather than feet and inches. Similarly, weights are quoted in pounds with a decimal rather than stones and pounds, which was the norm with the old measurements. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 23:56, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
- That's a hell of a sentence, recommend breaking it up While six of the Nine had bachelor's degrees, and three had master's degrees, only seven of the Fourteen had only bachelor's degree, and three of them were working on their master's, six had master's degrees, and Cunningham was working on his doctorate, and Buzz Aldrin had a Doctor of Science degree from Massachusetts Institute of Technology.
- Should African American be hyphenated here? African American astronaut candidate
- Lowercase He was selected as Pilot for Gemini 9,
- They are capitalised in Astronaut ranks and positions. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:45, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
- It should be changed there to lower case as well. Our style guide trumps source usage and other style guides. NASA's style guide has them capitalized, but we follow our own guide and not theirs. Kees08 (Talk) 23:22, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
- They are capitalised in Astronaut ranks and positions. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:45, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
- Uppercase Bean received a bachelor of science
- Lowercase served as backup Command Pilot
- Lowercase backup Commander for
- Uppercase Master of Science earned a master of science degree
- Uppercase a bachelor of science degree
- Uppercase for a master of science degree
- Lowercase pilot and prime crew to be Pilot on the Prime Crew
- Lowercase as Command Module Pilot of
- Uppercase earned a bachelor of arts degree
- Uppercase and a master of arts degree
- Did Apollo 2 become Apollo 7? Also, not sure you need to mention prime crew, that should be the default. Is the order right, selected for Apollo 2 then Apollo 1? He was selected as lunar module pilot in the prime crew for Apollo 2, and then the backup crew for Apollo 1.
- Lowercase in Astronautics in 1960
- Lowercase degree in Aeronautical Engineering from
- Lowercase and was backup Commander
- Looks like citation 16, 26, and 49 should be in the References section
- Citation 30 publisher is different from the rest
- Could add the dates for all the NASA biographies
- Sources are reliable
I think it just needs the capital letters issue, such as He was selected as Pilot for Gemini 9, fixed prior to promotion. Kees08 (Talk) 00:19, 10 August 2019 (UTC)