Talk:NBA Nation (tour)

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Article issues[edit]

I began work with the article's creator to help tone down the promotional language and peacock words used throughout the article. Along with general copy-editing, I also improved the reference linking to provide a greater amount of information in the footnotes. A lot of this is from press releases, so additional third-party source information, such as a review in a local newspaper, would help significantly. I know I'm going to take a lot of heat for removing the events list, but this came straight out of a press release, verbatim. These events can be described in prose in the article body, again without the flowery language. In its current form, the tags can be removed as their issues have been resolved, in my opinion. --McDoobAU93 (talk) 18:19, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]