Talk:Nayak: The Real Hero/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:00, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead[edit]
- Non-free use rationale looks good.
- Add a serial comma after Paresh Rawal.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "between a police" → "between the police"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "100 location" → "100 locations"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "some of whom applauding" → "some of whom applauded"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:22, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Plot and cast[edit]
- Plot is 688 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- "Because of his action" → "Because of his actions"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "redirects the question talking" → "redirects the question by talking"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "how difficult his occupation" - reword.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "for a day and experience" → "for a day to experience"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Assited by Bansal" → "Assisted by Bansal"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Chauhan sends assassins after him although they only destroy his house" → "Chauhan sends assassins after him, who only destroy his house"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "it will makes" → "it will make"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "In the final attempt" → "In a final attempt"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "few men was planning" → "few men are planning"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "blaming the him" → "blaming him"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Shivaji takes up a gun, but pointing it to his arm, shoots himself, and then hands over the gun to Chauhan." - clarify. Does Shivaji shoot himself in the arm on purpose or by accident? Does he just simply hand the gun to Chauhan after doing so?
- Done. Shivaji does it on purpose. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "with the state develops" → "with the state developing"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Production and soundtrack[edit]
- Remove the comma after "its subject".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "interview to Filmfare" → "interview with Filmfare"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "was originally to be" → "was originally going to be"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- didn't match mine ..." → didn't match mine".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Next actor suggested" → "The next actor suggested"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "Shah Rukh Khan, however" → "Shah Rukh Khan. However"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "he initially reluctant" → "he was initially reluctant"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "physical trainings" → "physical training"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "part as Manjari" → "part of Manjari"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "portray the role in her own way and not copying Koirala had done" → "portray the role in her own way, not copying what Koirala had done"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "The principal photography" → "Principal photography"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "states Maharashtra" → "states of Maharashtra"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "After the filming ended" → "After filming ended"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "who bought the rights" → "which bought the rights"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- was "a quite a letdown" → was "quite a letdown"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Release and reception[edit]
- "After scheduled for release" → "Originally scheduled for release"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- "the film was opened in 280 screens" → "the film opened on 280 screens"
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Rename #Critical reception to #Reception.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Then make a subsection titled #Critical response.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Finally, make #Accolades a subsection as well.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:52, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
References and external links[edit]
- Sources are archived.
- Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Is the link to Rotten Tomatoes necessary if it has 0 reviews?
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Sort categories in alphabetical order.
- Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:49, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
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