Talk:Nevada-class battleship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 9 December 2019 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: - can we get this done this week? I'd like to put this to bed in 2019 and next week is slightly busier ;) Parsecboy (talk) 19:06, 16 December 2019 (UTC)

And right after I nagged you about this, I got hit with some kind of stomach bug that had me mostly bed ridden...that'll show me, eh? Parsecboy (talk) 15:25, 21 December 2019 (UTC)

More like perfect timing from your wife's POV!

• One DAB to Pacific Fleet, external links OK
  • Fixed - where was the DAB bot when you need it?
    • There's still one in the early careers section. Since it's redundant to the one in the lede, you could just get rid of the link instead.
      • Done
• Images appropriately licensed. The infobox photo looks washed out, can you fix that?
  • I'll see what I can do
    • Alright, I darkened it a bit - see how it looks now.
      • Better, but a bit too dark, IMO. Not a big deal.
      • Tried something else, see if that looks better.
• Link foundered in the lede
  • Done
• In the infobox link long ton, kW, standard; link and abbreviate nautical miles. Abbreviate indicated hp. Decide on either MW or kW. Round the draft to one significant digit everywhere.
  • Should be all done
    • Missed standard displacement
      • Got it now
• Be consistent about capitalizing Standard-type or not.
  • Fixed
• Since the deck "thicker" deck
  • Done
• Why "return" to steam turbines?
  • The New Yorks were both VTE
    • I'd forgotten that
• Comported?
  • What's wrong with that?
    • Archaic term in that usage, according to my dictionary
      • I dunno that it's archaic, but I swapped it out with "aligned" anyway
• In design section, link long ton.
  • Done
• Copy-paste error with California.
  • I don't think that was copy-paste, I think that was me forgetting what ships were in the class
• Was Okie given TE engines for direct comparison with turbines?
  • I don't recall Friedman saying as much
• Need to explain /45 nomenclature
  • Added the note
• Link elevation, flying-off platform, director
  • Done
    • Try this link instead: [[Flight deck#Early flight decks|Flying-off platforms]]
      • Probably better to just turn it into a redirect to that for future use
• They had a 3 in unclear antecedent, "The ships"?
  • Done
• uptakes to from
  • Fixed
• a series of rolling changes "rolling"?
  • I suppose that's not correct in this context
• cite tag in the mod section. If covered by Friedman, remove it.
  • Fixed
• Link to the class article for North Dakota and explain why she was scrapped before completion
  • Done
• At some point in 1941, she was fitted with an SC air search radar. Which ship?
  • Fixed
• Delete the Decommissioned column, kinda misleading as Okie was unavailable long before '44.
  • True
• standard type battleships were too slow add hyphen
  • Done
• as they were by that time the oldest battleships in service with the US Navy Incorrect. The New Yorks were older
  • Doh
• its homeport San Pedro, California to Missing commas
  • Fixed
• Ampersand for Prange.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:43, 18 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Done
    • A few things still to work on.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:35, 21 December 2019 (UTC)