Talk:New York State Route 101/GA1
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Some initial points:
- In the lead:
- "The highway was designated by 1931" - should that not be in 1931?
- I'm not too keen on the bolding in the lead.
- The lead is very confusing - how are the two roads related? Are they two different roads, or just different names for parts? I can't make head or tail of it.
- Route description:
- What is an allignment?
- "A short distance after the curve, County Route 101 edges close to Williston Park, New York, becoming more developed in the process" - what is "more developed"?
- Some idea of distances would be good.
- Not too keen on red links - is Christopher Morley Park and Golf Course really notable?
- "short commercial buildings and one short complex" What is short referring to, their heights?
More later. Majorly talk 17:39, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
- History:
- "No other documents or inventories produced by the department do not follow suit" - I can understand what it says, but I'm not liking the double negatives there. But then I don't get the rest of the sentence: "No other documents or inventories produced by the department do not follow suit, marking Route 101 along the highway's northern terminus at Astor Lane" - what is marking Route 101? What is marking?
- "The 11.5-mile (18.5 km) long expressway, which would have cost $45 million and instead, the construction went to extending the Meadowbrook State Parkway northward" doesn't make sense. I'm also not too keen on "killed off" - it sounds very colloquial. How about "canceled", "scrapped" or "abandoned"? Killed off just sounds a little odd.
- Major intersections
- An extremely short section - is there any way it could be merged with another? Also, is there any point in the notes column?