Talk:No. 84 Wing RAAF/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:09, 23 May 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:09, 23 May 2013 (UTC)

• Commencing the following month, Sounds odd, how about "Beginning"?
• No. 32 Squadron completed upgrade from the HS 748 Perhaps "completed its conversion from"?
• Typo desseminating
• Pics appropriately licensed.
• No DABs, no duplicate links, external links good.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:12, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
  • Okay, will do. Tks/cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:57, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
    • All done, along with a little more detail from WWII. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:42, 27 May 2013 (UTC)