also known by his alternate identity, the Green Goblin – put this at the beginning of the sentence right after Osborn and remove the comma after identity (also don't forget to put commas around it)
popular enemies during the 1960s, and was – no comma
character resurfaces in The Clone Saga, and has been adapted into other media – no comma
on the page" and that he could relate – comma before and
characters into the film, and worked hard to prevent – no comma
with Dafoe confirmed in November – with Dafoe confirmed to be cast as him in November
and success, and is quite disappointed with Harry – no comma needed
"charted [Norman] Osborn's experimental serum-fueled – [Norman] not needed
into madness" and that the actor's voice – comma before and
expressed by the wearer, but scrapped after – was scrapped
major points where we would be hooking wires – put [they] next to we
deadline, and decides to experiment on himself – no comma
Stromm and the military officials and Quest Aerospace – remove the and after Stromm and put a comma after Stromm. Then put a comma after officials
chief J. Jonah Jameson for who takes pictures – remove for
Parker and his aunt May and Harry and his girlfriend Mary Jane Watson – put commas around them instead of the word and over and over
more to come...
broken by Harry, and discovers a hidden lair – no comma
called Goblin " a landmark villain", praising Dafoe's there is an extra space with the quotation mark
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
What makes Cinema Confidential (ref 17), and Moveline reliable
@Kaleeb18: I have addressed all your comments. Except the "alternate identity" comment and "remove for". I'm keeping "alternate identity" after the Marvel Comics mention to keep consistent with MCU character articles. I don't think removing "for" would be grammatically correct. — SirDot (talk) 09:56, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kaleeb18: Those further comments have been addressed. I checked the 21.9% copyright violation thingie and looks like it is for the Erik Sommers quote in the No Way Home section. I think that's okay. — SirDot (talk) 15:17, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
yes I meant that as in it is fine with no violations ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 15:18, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your thorough GA review, and my first GA! — SirDot (talk) 15:30, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No problem, and that's awesome congrats ― Kaleeb18TalkCaleb 15:43, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]