Talk:Nowhere girls

Rewrite needed

I've tried to improve the article but the sections such as causes and effects takes the assertions and suppositions made by the television program zh:沒女大翻身, at face value, and is written as if this programme was an honest documentary of a documented sociological condition. It is not, the programme was dishonest in trying to squeeze entertainment value from seven unhappy women, and dressed it up as a reflection of reality, and apart from TVB's own material, which as a prime source, is not a reliable source, the other references in this article are a commentary of the programme not about the "phenomena" of nowhere girls in society. Unless reliable academic sources can be found, this article will be as dishonest as the TV programme. I suggest that this article be rewritten as an article about the television program.--KTo288 (talk) 07:54, 1 November 2014 (UTC)