Talk:Ohio State Route 365/GA1
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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 21:48, 4 September 2013 (UTC)
If I review this, will you promise to not send highways less than a mile long to GAN again? :p (But I'm serious.) TCN7JM 21:48, 4 September 2013 (UTC)
- When converting whole numbers less than or equal to ten, you should use {{convert/spell}}.
- The first sentence of the second paragraph in the lead isn't...a sentence. Rewrite it so that it is.
- You should try to get rid of all usages of "currently". Saying "SR 365 is currently the shortest state highway in Ohio" is redundant because "is" already implies present tense.
- The history reference should go after the established year in the infobox.
- To say that 230 cars use the route on average each day is incorrect because the source states that 230 vehicles use the route. Looking at the other columns, that's 220 cars and ten trucks.
- Saying that "there are no reassurance markers on SR 365, except on SR 235/366" is also incorrect because SR 365 is not a part of SR 235/366. The last part of the sentence should be reworded to get rid of this confusion.
- Construction projects, even if the route is completely repaved, aren't generally considered notable enough to be included in history sections. This should be axed.
- I'm not sure the Logan County map works as an external link. I can't seem to identify SR 365 on it.
Well, this is all for my review. This will go on hold for now. TCN7JM 22:12, 4 September 2013 (UTC)