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January 16, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that on October 21, 1915, a band of Mexicans invaded the United States and conducted a raid on Ojo de Agua in Texas as part of the Plan de San Diego?

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Hi. Good work on this article. I have one observation: Note # 5, "US Army Armor School, p. 239" does not appear to be identified fully in the References section. Would it be possible to add these details, please? Also, I've made a few changes, mainly just copy editing/fixing typos etc. Please review and tweak as you feel necessary. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 08:15, 12 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I added the ref to the ref section, i had a feeling i forgot something when i fifrst posted the article now i know what it was lol. The changes you made all are excellent.XavierGreen (talk) 19:11, 12 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers, keep up the good work. AustralianRupert (talk) 22:04, 12 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Raid on Ojo de Agua/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:31, 14 January 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Add place of publication to refs.
Fixed.XavierGreen (talk) 22:47, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:
1 missing cite.
Added.XavierGreen (talk) 22:47, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
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Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
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No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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I think i've fixed the issues above, thanks for your review!XavierGreen (talk) 22:47, 16 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]