Talk:Omer Stewart

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Edit request 5-JAN-2024[edit]

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

What I think should be changed: add to last sentence first paragraph "and did pioneering research on early human’s use of fire to control their environment..[2]
Why it should be changed: Early work at what would become "controlled burning" which is why the following book was edited and published posthumously ^[1]
References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

Crawlstart (talk) 03:49, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Pioneering" is too promotional/POV but I'll take a look at where to add. By first paragraph, do you mean the lead @Crawlstart? --FeldBum (talk) 20:51, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the quick reply. I see what you mean about pioneering and would welcome a better word--though "pioneering" I believe is accurate. Maybe just remove the word pioneering? Yes, I think I mean the lead paragraph. Are there particular rules for that paragraph? Here is the lead paragraph I would propose with the changes in bold.

"was an American cultural anthropologist and author who taught at the University of Colorado Boulder.[1] He was a student of Alfred L. Kroeber. He defended Native American land claims, advocated for tribes legal use of peyote, and did research on early human’s use of fire to control their environment..[2] Crawlstart (talk) 23:06, 5 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ Stewart, Omer; Lewis, ed., Henry; Anderson, ed., Kat (2002). Forgotten fires : Native Americans and the transient wilderness. Norman, Okla.: University of Oklahoma Press. pp. 364 pages. ISBN 0806134232. {{cite book}}: |last2= has generic name (help)

Additional references requested Please provide sourcing from reliable, independent, secondary sources. When ready to proceed with the requested information, kindly change the {{Edit COI}} template's answer parameter to read from |ans=y to |ans=n. Regards, Spintendo 17:35, 16 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[1] Stewart, Omer; Lewis, ed., Henry; Anderson, ed., Kat (2002). Forgotten fires : Native Americans and the transient wilderness. Norman, Okla.: University of Oklahoma Press. pp. 364 pages. ISBN 0806134232. {{cite book}}: |last2= has generic name (help)

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